Do you agree or disagree with the following statement: “Movies and television strongly influence the way people behave?” Use reasons and specific examples to support your answer.
I agree with the statement “movies and television strongly influence the way people behave”. In this essay, I shall discus my views in the subsequent paragraphs.
Firstly, movies and television influences the actions of people. For instance, people who watch action movies tend to be more aggressive and feel the need to take fight or tend to violence in order to get out of a situation. Once, a man caused shot up a concert in Las Vegas. The only explanation he gave for his actions was that he saw it in a movie. Additionally, movies such as the Fast and Furious franchise inspires teenagers to drive recklessly, which has led to many accidents. Additionally, the release Tokyo Drift had caused an increase in illegal drag races around the world.
Secondly, movies and television shows give false expectations to the viewers about life. Many movies targeted at the teenage audience show the college life being all about parties, making hundreds of friends and just having fun in general. They exclude the part where the actually attend the classes, study and give exams. These movies make the teenagers believe that they will have the best time of their lives at college and will be able to pass with flying colours without studying a page. The teenagers, who take the movies seriously, then feel demotivated when they see the reality of college. They have study day and night to finish their assignments and do not have time to sleep, let alone party.
However, movies can also have a good impact on a person. It can teach them to be kind, learn from their mistakes and grow as a person. When a child sees their favourite actor doing something good, he will also try to be like his role model. For instance, an 11-year-old boy saved his brother from drowning by performing CPR. When asked how he learnt it, he replied that he saw ‘The Rock’ do it in the movie San Andreas.
In conclusion, movies and television have as impact on how people behave, however, how the movie enthusiast learn from them is up to the person.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 226, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Once” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...nce in order to get out of a situation. Once, a man caused shot up a concert in Las ...
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Line 3, column 486, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Two successive sentences begin with the same adverb. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...essly, which has led to many accidents. Additionally, the release Tokyo Drift had caused an ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, first, firstly, however, if, second, secondly, so, then, thus, for instance, in conclusion, in general, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 15.1003584229 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 9.8082437276 71% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 13.8261648746 94% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 11.0286738351 91% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 43.0788530466 72% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 52.1666666667 84% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.0752688172 99% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1696.0 1977.66487455 86% => OK
No of words: 354.0 407.700716846 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.79096045198 4.8611393121 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.33761313653 4.48103885553 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.5880578329 2.67179642975 97% => OK
Unique words: 208.0 212.727598566 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.587570621469 0.524837075471 112% => OK
syllable_count: 520.2 618.680645161 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.59856630824 83% => OK
Article: 6.0 3.08781362007 194% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.94265232975 40% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 20.6003584229 97% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.1344086022 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 33.5020894871 48.9658058833 68% => OK
Chars per sentence: 84.8 100.406767564 84% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.7 20.6045352989 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.35 5.45110844103 116% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 11.8709677419 76% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.85842293907 130% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.88709677419 123% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.1991228472 0.236089414692 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0663715953831 0.076458572812 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.135357900265 0.0737576698707 184% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.148334833607 0.150856017488 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.140997301506 0.0645574589148 218% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.0 11.7677419355 85% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 58.1214874552 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 10.1575268817 86% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.21 10.9000537634 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.0 8.01818996416 100% => OK
difficult_words: 79.0 86.8835125448 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 10.002688172 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.0537634409 88% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 81.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 24.5 Out of 30
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