You have just spent a week with a friend on holiday. When you got home, you realized you have left your wallet there.
Write a letter to your friend.
In your letter:
Thank your friend for the holiday
Explain that you left your wallet in there house
Give them instructions of how to send it back to you
Dear Dave,
Hope this letter finds you well. I have reached home safely. I really enjoyed the holiday which I spent with you guys. This was one of the best holidays ever. I am writing to thank you and request you for the wallet I left at your house.
I want to thank you from the bottom of my heart for having me at your place and making the trip so special. Last week was hands-down the best time of my life as I have witnessed such beautiful places and vibrant culture never before. The food your mother cooked was delicious and celestial. I already missed the flavor and taste.
When I reached home, I realized that I have left my purse at your house. I believe it was sitting atop your piano when I was packing my stuff and I forgot to pick it up in a hurry. Luckily, I had cash in my pocket, so I did not need the wallet on way back home.
Still, my ID, driving license and bank cards are in my wallet. I would like to request you to courier it to me ASAP. You can send it to my home, since I will be at home for next few days. Say hello to all and stay fine.
Warm wishes,
Jack
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| 2019-05-13 | Isha verma | 67 | view |
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, really, so, still, well
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.48453608247 94% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 5.05154639175 158% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 47.0 32.9175257732 143% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 26.0 26.3917525773 99% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.85567010309 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 887.0 937.175257732 95% => OK
No of words: 218.0 206.0 106% => OK
Chars per words: 4.06880733945 4.54256449028 90% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.84250218741 3.78020617076 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 1.9936193564 2.54303337028 78% => OK
Unique words: 131.0 127.690721649 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.600917431193 0.622605031667 97% => OK
syllable_count: 273.6 290.88556701 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 9.13402061856 131% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 12.6804123711 134% => OK
Sentence length: 12.0 16.3608247423 73% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 28.9060044528 44.8134815571 65% => OK
Chars per sentence: 52.1764705882 76.5299724578 68% => OK
Words per sentence: 12.8235294118 16.8248392259 76% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.58823529412 4.34317383033 37% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 7.41237113402 175% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.385082654259 0.216113520407 178% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.113162446018 0.0766984524023 148% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.110444202401 0.0603063233224 183% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.241065191762 0.12726935374 189% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.118235640484 0.0580467560999 204% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 4.1 8.37731958763 49% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 84.68 70.7449484536 120% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 4.4 7.45979381443 59% => Flesch kincaid grade is low.
coleman_liau_index: 5.44 8.71597938144 62% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.4 7.59969072165 84% => OK
difficult_words: 30.0 41.2886597938 73% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 5.0 8.62886597938 58% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 6.8 8.54432989691 80% => OK
text_standard: 5.0 8.15463917526 61% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.