Many people prefer to travel by car rather than buses or trains.
Why do you think this happens?
What can government do to motivate people travel by buses or trains?
In the modern world, unlike medieval times, people have a plethora of choices for commutation however many people prefer to travel by cars rather than buses and trains. Although there are a plethora of reasons behind it however the preponderant reason being the faster and comfortable travel. In the below paragraphs I will elucidate on these two reasons. Additionally, I will also highlight the steps which local governments can take to encourage people to use public transportation.
Firstly travel by car is considered to be more comfortable in comparison to train and buses. unlike trains and buses, most of the cars are air-conditioned which reduce travel fatigue while covering longer distances. Furthermore, passengers can stop the car at their liking while travelling from one place to another which makes travel more convenient as compared to public transportation. For instance, in many third world countries, people prefer to travel by cars due to the lack of facilities in public transportation like uncomfortable seating, no air-conditioning. In a recent survey done in India from transportation authority, it was published that around 70% would choose travelling by car as it is much more convenient and comfortable as compared to public transport. Moreover travelling by car is much faster as compared to buses and trains as it does not a selected route and it does not stop at designated stops.
Lastly, if all these factors are taken into consideration the government should take measures like upgrading transportation infrastructure which can make public transport comfortable and efficient. Apart from this, the government should discourage the use of cars by introducing heavy taxes on licenses as well as cars. For instance, the government of Singapore has introduced similar measures which discourage the use of cars and promotes the use of public transportation. Hence these measures have brought in encouraging results whereby in a recent survey done by a local newspaper published that 90 per cent of commuters in Singapore use public transportation every day.
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Suggestion: Unlike
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Suggestion: to travel
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Suggestion: Moreover,
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Suggestion: Hence,
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, furthermore, hence, however, if, lastly, moreover, so, third, well, while, apart from, for instance, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 50.0 41.998997996 119% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 8.3376753507 168% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1764.0 1615.20841683 109% => OK
No of words: 328.0 315.596192385 104% => OK
Chars per words: 5.37804878049 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.25567506705 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.22574230905 2.80592935109 115% => OK
Unique words: 170.0 176.041082164 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.518292682927 0.561755894193 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 555.3 506.74238477 110% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.8426547739 49.4020404114 83% => OK
Chars per sentence: 126.0 106.682146367 118% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.4285714286 20.7667163134 113% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.5 7.06120827912 135% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.38176352705 68% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.269488336168 0.244688304435 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0992808268826 0.084324248473 118% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0863151955421 0.0667982634062 129% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.190181119532 0.151304729494 126% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0944431170889 0.056905535591 166% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.6 13.0946893788 119% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 39.67 50.2224549098 79% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.22 12.4159519038 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.58 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 79.0 78.4519038076 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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