The diagram illustrates the process that is used to manufacture the bricks for building industry
The diagram shows the process of bricks are making for the building industry.
To begin with, the clay used to make the bricks is dug up from the ground by a larger digger, after this clay is then placed into a metal grid, which used to break up the clay into smaller pieces. Following this, sand and water added to the clay , and this mixture turned into bricks by either placing it into a mould or using a wire cutter. In the next step, these bricks placed in an oven to dry for 24-48 hours.
In the next stage, the bricks go through a heating and cooling process. They heated in kiln at a moderate heat followed by a cooling process in a chamber for 3 days, finally bricks are ready for selling.
To sum up, this is process where every process is essential to get a best quality of bricks.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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...ter added to the clay , and this mixture turned into bricks by either placing it ...
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...e cutter. In the next step, these bricks placed in an oven to dry for 24-48 hours...
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...ough a heating and cooling process. They heated in kiln at a moderate heat follo...
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...ready for selling. To sum up, this is process where every process is essential...
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...where every process is essential to get a best quality of bricks.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, then, to begin with, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.0 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 6.8 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 7.0 5.60731707317 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 29.0 33.7804878049 86% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.97073170732 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 650.0 965.302439024 67% => OK
No of words: 151.0 196.424390244 77% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.30463576159 4.92477711251 87% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.50545371207 3.73543355544 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.0520832601 2.65546596893 77% => OK
Unique words: 91.0 106.607317073 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.602649006623 0.547539520022 110% => OK
syllable_count: 191.7 283.868780488 68% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.45097560976 90% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 1.53170731707 196% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 3.36585365854 149% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 8.94146341463 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 22.4926829268 93% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.9795871017 43.030603864 102% => OK
Chars per sentence: 92.8571428571 112.824112599 82% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.5714285714 22.9334400587 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.57142857143 5.23603664747 106% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 1.69756097561 471% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.09268292683 122% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.299296268222 0.215688989381 139% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.157657186768 0.103423049105 152% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.111639955447 0.0843802449381 132% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.21099986803 0.15604864568 135% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.125827463319 0.0819641961636 154% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.6 13.2329268293 73% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 75.54 61.2550243902 123% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.9 10.3012195122 77% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.66 11.4140731707 67% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.29 8.06136585366 90% => OK
difficult_words: 25.0 40.7170731707 61% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 11.4329268293 79% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.9970731707 95% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.0658536585 72% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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