Essay topics: Do you agree or disagree? The rules that societies today expect young people to follow and obey are too strict.
Rules and regulations are always implemented in our society to make the people’s life safe. Although some people believe that some rules become very strict for the young people to follow but in my opinion, I believe that, it is important to obey the rules to make the society even more progressive. In the following paragraph I explore this with three reasons.
First of all, strict rules can prevent people for doing serious offensive crime, save other’s life. If the rules are not strict, crimes are increasing continuously that make the society anarchy, threatens other’s life. For example, the rule for any rape case is only 1000$ fine; which is very easy to pay, so that rape case continuously increases in India during last year. On the other hand, in Arabic country the fine is merely death in front of public. So people are more reluctant to commit this type of crime in Southey Arab. Although the rule is very strict to follow that make women’s movement safe.
Second, the main purpose of the rule is to benefit more people not for the freedom of minority. Some rules really strict to follow but it can helpful for others. For instance, it's a serious crime to drink alcohol before driving. Apparently it seems that it takes away freedom for some people, but if we think that, drunken driver can make any accident in the road it causes death or other serious illness for the passenger; it becomes right to follow strict rule to avoid any unwanted incident.
In addition, rule should be changed when it is necessary in the society. Few decades ago women are not allowed to do job. Recently people understand the importance of women in the job sector, the economy of the country greatly depends on the involvement of the women in job sector. Nowadays this rule is banned, more and more women are joining various job sectors to earn money and even some country is ruled by women.
In conclusion, strict rules are necessary for the society, in spite of it hard to follow for young people. There is no other option to make the society livable without implementing strict rule.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 278, Rule ID: CURRENCY[1]
Message: The currency mark is usually put at the beginning of the number: '$1000'.
Suggestion: $1000
...ple, the rule for any rape case is only 1000$ fine; which is very easy to pay, so tha...
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Line 5, column 177, Rule ID: IT_IS[17]
Message: Did you mean 'it's' (='it is') instead of 'its' (possessive pronoun)?
Suggestion: it's; it is
...t can helpful for others. For instance, its a serious crime to drink alcohol before...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
apparently, but, first, if, really, second, so, even so, for example, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, first of all, in my opinion, in spite of, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 15.1003584229 119% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 9.8082437276 41% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 13.8261648746 51% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 9.0 11.0286738351 82% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 43.0788530466 56% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 52.1666666667 84% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.0752688172 62% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1754.0 1977.66487455 89% => OK
No of words: 364.0 407.700716846 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.81868131868 4.8611393121 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.36792674256 4.48103885553 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.45437783052 2.67179642975 92% => OK
Unique words: 182.0 212.727598566 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.5 0.524837075471 95% => OK
syllable_count: 567.0 618.680645161 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 9.59856630824 42% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.94265232975 121% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 20.6003584229 92% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.1344086022 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 53.3854431485 48.9658058833 109% => OK
Chars per sentence: 92.3157894737 100.406767564 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.1578947368 20.6045352989 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.0 5.45110844103 165% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 11.8709677419 51% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 10.0 3.85842293907 259% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.237119784687 0.236089414692 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0878989145642 0.076458572812 115% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0633195962036 0.0737576698707 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.158854013337 0.150856017488 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0672174689932 0.0645574589148 104% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.9 11.7677419355 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 58.1214874552 90% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.1575268817 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.68 10.9000537634 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.05 8.01818996416 100% => OK
difficult_words: 80.0 86.8835125448 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.002688172 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.0537634409 95% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 63.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 19.0 Out of 30
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