At the present time, the population of some countries includes a relatively large number of young adults, compared with the number of older people. Do the advantages of this situation outweigh the disadvantages?
Some countries have young population trend instead of ageing one. Personally, I believe that this tendency brings out more advantages than disadvantages.
It is true that a population skewed to younger age trend could lead to some negative consequences. Usually, wisdom tends to increase with age and the elderly people who acquiring their intellect through thick and thin experience passing on that knowledge to the younger generation. However, young people tend to be immature and lack wisdom, in part, which could be detrimental to society. In particular, a large number of young adults who usually cannot put up with the complaints of their superiors decide to quit the job. Furthermore, for young people those do not gain enough hands-on experience yet, sometimes, it is difficult for them to solve the problems without assistance. For instance, children usually tend to ask for advice from their parents when they get into trouble.
However, I am convinced that the benefits contributed by young generation outweigh the drawbacks of young population trend. The main benefit derived from having a youthful generation is the growing economy. Normally, young people who are much more open-minded and very motivated are willing to use their creativity to challenge new things without fear of facing difficulty. For example, more and more successful startup projects performed by young people, which affirms the position of young people in economic fields. Furthermore, young working individuals are those still having good health in order to be able to work hard and withstand under the pressure in jobs than the elderly. Therefore, they can easily support the older generation by affording to social welfare and government taxes as well as taking care of their families.
In conclusion, I think that a population in which there is a huge number of young adults than the one of elderly brings more pros than cons as a whole.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 405, Rule ID: LARGE_NUMBER_OF[1]
Message: Specify a number, remove phrase, or simply use 'many' or 'numerous'
Suggestion: many; numerous
... detrimental to society. In particular, a large number of young adults who usually cannot put up ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, furthermore, however, if, so, still, therefore, well, for example, for instance, i think, in conclusion, in particular, as well as, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 41.998997996 110% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 8.3376753507 168% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1629.0 1615.20841683 101% => OK
No of words: 311.0 315.596192385 99% => OK
Chars per words: 5.23794212219 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.19942759058 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.76820677428 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 184.0 176.041082164 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.591639871383 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 499.5 506.74238477 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 34.4315101163 49.4020404114 70% => OK
Chars per sentence: 108.6 106.682146367 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.7333333333 20.7667163134 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.8 7.06120827912 139% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.177823816329 0.244688304435 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0599926162789 0.084324248473 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0494863132675 0.0667982634062 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.115774085384 0.151304729494 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0267270804983 0.056905535591 47% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.6 13.0946893788 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.11 12.4159519038 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.84 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 83.0 78.4519038076 106% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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