The chart below gives information about global sales of games software,CDs and DVD or video
The tabular chart reveals that information about representation global sales.It is give three categories.
First of all,it is clearly see that CDs was very popular in 2000 than it was upsurge proportion in the chart.As well as, after year was nearby down relate to 2000.Therefore, next year was CDs bit climbed in 32 percentage.Hence, DVD video and CDs was similar ratio in 2003.
On the other hand,in 2002 to 2003 games software was involved proportion in the chart.Otherwise,in 2000 to 2003 DVD/video had improved every years.
To sum up,CDs was higher percentage in 2000 but also it was reduce day by day percentage every years.However,DVD/video was superb process in 2000 to 2003.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, hence, however, so, therefore, well, as well as, first of all, to sum up, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 7.0 157% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 6.8 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 6.0 5.60731707317 107% => OK
Preposition: 21.0 33.7804878049 62% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.97073170732 101% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 584.0 965.302439024 60% => OK
No of words: 112.0 196.424390244 57% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.21428571429 4.92477711251 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.2531531234 3.73543355544 87% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.53187923326 2.65546596893 133% => OK
Unique words: 76.0 106.607317073 71% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.678571428571 0.547539520022 124% => OK
syllable_count: 162.0 283.868780488 57% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 1.0 4.33902439024 23% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 3.36585365854 149% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 4.0 8.94146341463 45% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 28.0 22.4926829268 124% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 62.9007154172 43.030603864 146% => OK
Chars per sentence: 146.0 112.824112599 129% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.0 22.9334400587 122% => OK
Discourse Markers: 27.25 5.23603664747 520% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 15.0 1.69756097561 884% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.09268292683 24% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.184285913215 0.215688989381 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.133975272815 0.103423049105 130% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0809191541864 0.0843802449381 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.133975272815 0.15604864568 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0809191541864 0.0819641961636 99% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.1 13.2329268293 129% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 59.98 61.2550243902 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.8 10.3012195122 115% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.23 11.4140731707 116% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.68 8.06136585366 120% => OK
difficult_words: 33.0 40.7170731707 81% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 11.4329268293 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 10.9970731707 120% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 11.0658536585 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 150 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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