Today people are surrounded by advertising.This affects what people think people think is important and has a negative impact on people 's lives.To what extent do you agree or disagree?
It is no doubt in few days advertising is very common in any nation Some dozen believe that it has bad influences on the teenager.The root can that there are so plethora advertisements avialable in any items.There are manifold reasons behind it.This essay would throw some light an all aspects to see things in the right perspective.
The seeds to the issue are multiheads.There most predominant television has giving a lot of entertainment resources of human being life.Therefore,it is true that technology is very fast but also everybody use it like teenager,adolescent and older and so on.However,
most of time youngster using umpteen application.For instances,instagram,
Snapchat,Twitter,
Facebook and extra.Moreover,off spring has always following her/him favourite actress/actor in our life as well as they bollywood star has giving any advertisement instead of utilise should use it for any product without the knowledge.
Nevertheless,there are no denying,in my point of view, some older trust that people do it use any products without the knowledge because sometimes adverts must fake on social side.After that, there do not give right information as well as there has giving lot of cheaper rate for any products.For example, electronic materials like car, motorcycle , creams, clothes and so on.lastly,i could not say that all advertisement bad all in all primitive has suggent that using any product please knowledge about product.
All said and done,I reckon on one hand some people think that adult should care full about product has purchase for advertising it.On other hand most of time product has fake relate to advertisement on television and interest.Thus,juvenile can not used it.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, lastly, moreover, nevertheless, so, therefore, thus, well, for example, for instance, i reckon, no doubt, as well as, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1454.0 1615.20841683 90% => OK
No of words: 264.0 315.596192385 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.50757575758 5.12529762239 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03089032464 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.67252215927 2.80592935109 131% => OK
Unique words: 160.0 176.041082164 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.606060606061 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 458.1 506.74238477 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 4.0 16.0721442886 25% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 66.0 20.2975951904 325% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 138.083987124 49.4020404114 280% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 363.5 106.682146367 341% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 66.0 20.7667163134 318% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 38.0 7.06120827912 538% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.38176352705 137% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 35.0 5.01903807615 697% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0554150039252 0.244688304435 23% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.038308305539 0.084324248473 45% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.034318466183 0.0667982634062 51% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0255388703593 0.151304729494 17% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0333359920164 0.056905535591 59% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 37.5 13.0946893788 286% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: -3.97 50.2224549098 -8% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 18.2 7.44779559118 244% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 30.2 11.3001002004 267% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 15.57 12.4159519038 125% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.86 8.58950901804 126% => OK
difficult_words: 66.0 78.4519038076 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 31.5 9.78957915832 322% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 28.4 10.1190380762 281% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 16.0 10.7795591182 148% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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