You planned to throw a surprise party for your father on his 60th birthday.
Write a letter to your aunt, in your letter, write-
• Invite her to the surprise party
• Explain why this party means a lot to you
• Say what you want to bring with her
Dear Aunt Joseph,
I hope this letter finds you in radiant health and to the best of spirits. As you must be knowing that it is my father's birthday on 22nd june, coming saturday. I have planned a surprise party for him in our community hall. I am writing this letter to invite you for the same.
This party means a lot to me because it is his 60th birthday, he has given most of his years to our education and upbringing, never celebrated his birthday with complete family and friends. I have invited all his colleagues and college friends to be reunited on this wonderful occasion.
I have ordered food from Godavari Indian restaurant, which is my father's favorite restaurant as well. Due to shortage of staff, they denied for delivery so it will be really helpful if you could pick the order while coming to party as the restaurant is very near to your house. Second most important thing I want you to bring is some childhood pictures and family photos of my father, I will prepare a side-show of them.
Hope to see you soon.
Yours lovingly
Harry
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| 2021-08-04 | SKN | 73 | view |
| 2019-05-15 | harmankaur | 87 | view |
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Dear Aunt Joseph, I hope this letter finds you in radiant ...
^^^
Line 3, column 91, Rule ID: PROGRESSIVE_VERBS[1]
Message: This verb is normally not used in the progressive form. Try a simple form instead.
...and to the best of spirits. As you must be knowing that it is my fathers birthday on 22nd ...
^^^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, really, second, so, well, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.48453608247 107% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 37.0 32.9175257732 112% => OK
Preposition: 21.0 26.3917525773 80% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.85567010309 26% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 874.0 937.175257732 93% => OK
No of words: 191.0 206.0 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.57591623037 4.54256449028 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.71756304063 3.78020617076 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.43619265978 2.54303337028 96% => OK
Unique words: 122.0 127.690721649 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.638743455497 0.622605031667 103% => OK
syllable_count: 266.4 290.88556701 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.13402061856 109% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 16.3608247423 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 53.5134184146 44.8134815571 119% => OK
Chars per sentence: 79.4545454545 76.5299724578 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.3636363636 16.8248392259 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.18181818182 4.34317383033 73% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 7.41237113402 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.407925307546 0.216113520407 189% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.13600862287 0.0766984524023 177% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0670347036138 0.0603063233224 111% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.20098234439 0.12726935374 158% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0894360566611 0.0580467560999 154% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.8 8.37731958763 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 71.14 70.7449484536 101% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 7.45979381443 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.99 8.71597938144 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.04 7.59969072165 93% => OK
difficult_words: 31.0 41.2886597938 75% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 8.62886597938 93% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 8.54432989691 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.