If you want to recommend a way to reduce living expenses for your friend, which of the following will you choose? Why?
1. Find a roommate to share a room
2. Do not buy the latest mobile phone, Buy new technological devices less frequently
3. Buy cheap foods and cook home (do not often eat outside)
As prices and personal demands increase, students are always trying to find a way to save their money and cut their spending. I believe that looking for a roommate is the optimum decision any student can take and that is why I strongly recommend this to my friend. I have two reasons to support my idea.
First of all, sharing the house with someone else will help my friend save more money as the house rent would be divided between two people. Half the rent being saved each month is way better than trying to buy cheap food or gadgets as those stuff are not that expensive. Therefore, he might end up saving a few dollars which will not be of any help. Four years ago, I was living in a studio near my university with a rent which was ok for me, but as time passed my lecturers started demanding high-quality materials and tools. As a result, I found my self spending a lot of money and paying the rent late. I looked for a housemate who can pitch in and help me with rent. When she started living with me, I was able to pay my rent on time and even buy whatever I need. This would have not been possible if I did not find a roommate.
Secondly, having a roommate can stop my friend from feeling lonely as he lives away from his family. living alone could be bad for the mental health of students because after a long day they return to an empty home with no one who can help them overcome hardships they face at college. My friend can find someone to share his problems with or they can cook together. For instance, when I was staying with my roommate, it was very awkward at first, but we grew accustomed to each other. I would come back home and we would just sit in the living room sharing stories and giving advice to each other on how to deal with problems. One day, I had a problem with one of my projects and went home crying, but when she saw me in this state, she cooked for me. Instantly, I forgot all about the project and was happy to have her in my life.
In conclusion, I recommend my friend to find a housemate so that he can save money and make new friendships that might last forever.
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- People attend college or university for many different reasons. Why do you think people attend college or university? Use specific reasons and details to support your answer 71
- If your friend wants to reduce living expenses, which would you suggest?1. Find a roommate that can share the living expenses.2. Buy the new technology products less frequently.3. Shop for less expensive food and cooking at home 70
- Many filmmakers make movies based on books. When a movie is produced based on books, some people prefer to read books before watching films, other people choose to watch the movie first. Which one do you think is better? Why? 76
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 102, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Living
...onely as he lives away from his family. living alone could be bad for the mental healt...
^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, look, second, secondly, so, therefore, for instance, in conclusion, as a result, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 15.1003584229 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 17.0 9.8082437276 173% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 13.8261648746 123% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 11.0286738351 109% => OK
Pronoun: 59.0 43.0788530466 137% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 45.0 52.1666666667 86% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 8.0752688172 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1710.0 1977.66487455 86% => OK
No of words: 405.0 407.700716846 99% => OK
Chars per words: 4.22222222222 4.8611393121 87% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.48604634366 4.48103885553 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.2205425751 2.67179642975 83% => OK
Unique words: 218.0 212.727598566 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.538271604938 0.524837075471 103% => OK
syllable_count: 528.3 618.680645161 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.51630824373 86% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 15.0 9.59856630824 156% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.86738351254 161% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.94265232975 20% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 20.6003584229 92% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.1344086022 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.0844665552 48.9658058833 78% => OK
Chars per sentence: 90.0 100.406767564 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.3157894737 20.6045352989 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.73684210526 5.45110844103 105% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 11.8709677419 93% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.85842293907 130% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.133063741428 0.236089414692 56% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0453506785565 0.076458572812 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0354859104138 0.0737576698707 48% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0887545108607 0.150856017488 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.020003032956 0.0645574589148 31% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.1 11.7677419355 77% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 75.54 58.1214874552 130% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.9 10.1575268817 78% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.2 10.9000537634 66% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.13 8.01818996416 89% => OK
difficult_words: 63.0 86.8835125448 73% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 10.002688172 90% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.0537634409 103% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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