Governments prohibiting the underage children for getting full-time jobs in certain countries, do you agree or disagree?
In some countries government does not allow to underage children to do full-time work, while I agree that full-time job is not suitable for underage children that ultimately can devastate children's life due to begin work at inappropriate age.
It has many disadvantages of start working at early age which could be overwhelmingly detrimental effect for children's life. Moreover, it has seen several times that vast majority of underage children are working full-time instead of study in many countries for instance, India, Bangladesh, Japan and other which shows the credibility and strength of the country. Furthermore, it founds specially in underdeveloped countries wherein they do not have such enough resources of food and studies for instance, South Africa, Brazil, Indonesia and Bhutan. In order to stream line the situation of this problem government need to take stern steps to implement sanctions for those industrialist who get work done by teenagers or underage children. Meanwhile, government ought to spread the value of education by different educational sectors that eventually will be worthwhile for those who are de-motivated from education and they believe job is more important than study which moves their tendency towards the money.
In some countries there are certain situations wherein people prefer to do work from begging instead of study due to inadequacy of money and high illiteracy rate. Along with this, most of the people are intend to get education, but due insufficiency of money parents send their children deliberately to work. Many adepts asset, the country where child labor is working in industries that country can never be get success, because, children are future of the country. Hence, it is the responsibility of the government to look after on these matters for the betterment of the country, as well as try to implement free education systems among the country.
In conclusion, government is responsible to provide education to complete nations at free of cost for reducing illiteracy rate that eventually will impact on your society, alongside form the criteria of job for underage children.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'countries'' or 'country's'?
Suggestion: countries'; country's
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Message: Did you mean 'this industrialist' or 'those industrialists'?
Suggestion: this industrialist; those industrialists
... stern steps to implement sanctions for those industrialist who get work done by teenagers or under...
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Message: A noun should not follow "who". Try changing to a verb or maybe to 'who is a are'.
Suggestion: who is a are
...eventually will be worthwhile for those who are de-motivated from education and they be...
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Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'intended'.
Suggestion: intended
...Along with this, most of the people are intend to get education, but due insufficiency...
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Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'adepts'' or 'adept's'?
Suggestion: adepts'; adept's
...eir children deliberately to work. Many adepts asset, the country where child labor is...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... criteria of job for underage children.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, furthermore, hence, if, look, moreover, so, well, while, for instance, in conclusion, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 7.0 186% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 1.00243902439 698% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 8.0 6.8 118% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 3.15609756098 380% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 21.0 5.60731707317 375% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 51.0 33.7804878049 151% => OK
Nominalization: 16.0 3.97073170732 403% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1813.0 965.302439024 188% => OK
No of words: 338.0 196.424390244 172% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.36390532544 4.92477711251 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.28774723029 3.73543355544 115% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.93612931633 2.65546596893 111% => OK
Unique words: 191.0 106.607317073 179% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.565088757396 0.547539520022 103% => OK
syllable_count: 568.8 283.868780488 200% => syllable counts are too long.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.45097560976 117% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 1.53170731707 261% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 1.0 4.33902439024 23% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 3.36585365854 178% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 8.94146341463 123% => OK
Sentence length: 30.0 22.4926829268 133% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 43.8138436178 43.030603864 102% => OK
Chars per sentence: 164.818181818 112.824112599 146% => OK
Words per sentence: 30.7272727273 22.9334400587 134% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.18181818182 5.23603664747 175% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 1.69756097561 353% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 1.13902439024 439% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.09268292683 49% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.321688643891 0.215688989381 149% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.122173584573 0.103423049105 118% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0949173085266 0.0843802449381 112% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.224531529188 0.15604864568 144% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0988841747058 0.0819641961636 121% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 19.2 13.2329268293 145% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 32.57 61.2550243902 53% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 11.2 6.51609756098 172% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 16.2 10.3012195122 157% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.4 11.4140731707 126% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.96 8.06136585366 111% => OK
difficult_words: 82.0 40.7170731707 201% => Less difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 11.4329268293 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.0 10.9970731707 127% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 11.0658536585 136% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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