Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
Childhood is the happiest time of a person’s life.
Use specific reasons and examples to support your opinion.
All children want to become adults because they do not know how it is good for being a child. I agree with the idea that childhood is the happiest time of one's life because children can get everything they want and have no big problems in their life.
To begin with, parents give as much as possible everything that their children want and need. For instance, when I was an elementary school student, I wanted to become a professional soccer player. Therefore, my mother made me join a soccer team and bought soccer clothes and a pair of sneakers. Saruul, one of my friends, and I often went to a park with a soccer ball and enjoyed kicking the ball. After school, we had a team practice and run around a playground. Our coach gave us a lot of feedback and taught us strategies and tactics. As a result, it was interesting. I got a thing that I wanted, and my mother supported me every time when I wanted to do something.
Furthermore, children do not have big issues like adults. Adults have many kinds of problems. Now, for me, I deal with different problems every day such as taking my children to and fro the school, making them to do their homework and doing my works done on time. All the above things I do daily make me feel busy, and I cannot have time to chill and feeling happiness. Whereas, when I was a child, the biggest problem is just going to school. Now, it is just a little problem, and I understood that my childhood was a happier period of my entire lifetime.
In summary, I strongly consider that every individual will say that the happiest time of his or her life is the time when they were children. Thus, I hope that people always try to their children's childhood happy.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 156, Rule ID: ONES[1]
Message: Did you mean 'one's'?
Suggestion: one's
... that childhood is the happiest time of ones life because children can get everythin...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
furthermore, if, so, therefore, thus, whereas, for instance, in summary, such as, as a result, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 15.1003584229 73% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 9.8082437276 41% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 13.8261648746 116% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 11.0286738351 100% => OK
Pronoun: 49.0 43.0788530466 114% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 52.1666666667 54% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 1.0 8.0752688172 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1390.0 1977.66487455 70% => OK
No of words: 314.0 407.700716846 77% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.42675159236 4.8611393121 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.20951839842 4.48103885553 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.49240804321 2.67179642975 93% => OK
Unique words: 172.0 212.727598566 81% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.547770700637 0.524837075471 104% => OK
syllable_count: 423.0 618.680645161 68% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.51630824373 86% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.59856630824 115% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 1.86738351254 214% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 20.6003584229 87% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.1344086022 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 35.9134762697 48.9658058833 73% => OK
Chars per sentence: 77.2222222222 100.406767564 77% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.4444444444 20.6045352989 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.0 5.45110844103 110% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 11.8709677419 101% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.160447748482 0.236089414692 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0472955724755 0.076458572812 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0519190996761 0.0737576698707 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.109389869929 0.150856017488 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0311006751331 0.0645574589148 48% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.2 11.7677419355 70% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 79.6 58.1214874552 137% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.4 10.1575268817 63% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.12 10.9000537634 74% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.09 8.01818996416 88% => OK
difficult_words: 52.0 86.8835125448 60% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.002688172 110% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.0537634409 88% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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