Your local council is considering closing a sport and leisure centre that it runs, in order to save money.
Write a letter to the local council, in your letter,
- Give details of how you and your friends or family use the centre.
- Explain the why the centre is important for the local community.
- Describe the possible effects on local people if the centre closed.
Dear sir,
I am Harry singh, a senior member of villa society. Today morning, I received a message from my friend that mentions your plan to close the sports and leisure centre of our area. I am writing this letter to request you to reconsider your plan, as this centre has become a necessity of a society.
I am pleased to mention that this sports and leisure centre is a pride of our society as it benefits our three generations simultaneously. On one hand, children enjoy playing board games , while adults love swimming and other sports activities, at the same time elderly people love to spend hours there, reading newspaper and chatting with each other.
This is the only sports and activity center in our area. Moreover, people from nearby societies also visit this center often. In extreme weathers such as hot summers or too much cold, it is the best place to keep children engaged and do their interested activities. Hence, this centre is a valuable asset of this society.
If this centre closes, it would affect the society members in many ways like it would be really tought to keep children busy during their holidays as there would be no activity to do. Similarly, elderly people would definitely miss their favorite meeting place while the adults will miss their stress relieving and relaxing area as well. So, on the behalf of all the society members, I request you to reconsider your plan to close this centre.
Looking forward for a positive revert from you regarding this matter.
Yours sincerely
Harry Singh
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Dear sir, I am Harry singh, a senior member of vil...
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Line 3, column 61, Rule ID: TODAY_MORNING[1]
Message: This is a non-standard collocation. Normally, 'this morning' is used.
Suggestion: This morning
...ingh, a senior member of villa society. Today morning, I received a message from my friend th...
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Line 5, column 187, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...hand, children enjoy playing board games , while adults love swimming and other sp...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, hence, if, look, moreover, really, regarding, similarly, so, well, while, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.48453608247 80% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 4.92783505155 101% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 5.05154639175 158% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 37.0 32.9175257732 112% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 26.3917525773 114% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.85567010309 26% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1284.0 937.175257732 137% => OK
No of words: 263.0 206.0 128% => OK
Chars per words: 4.88212927757 4.54256449028 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.02706775958 3.78020617076 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.40693394958 2.54303337028 95% => OK
Unique words: 155.0 127.690721649 121% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.589353612167 0.622605031667 95% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 392.4 290.88556701 135% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.13402061856 109% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.83505154639 163% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 1.44329896907 277% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 12.6804123711 110% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 16.3608247423 110% => OK
Sentence length SD: 51.4430535165 44.8134815571 115% => OK
Chars per sentence: 91.7142857143 76.5299724578 120% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.7857142857 16.8248392259 112% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.21428571429 4.34317383033 143% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 2.54639175258 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 7.41237113402 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.158102218451 0.216113520407 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0643437998397 0.0766984524023 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0709307446417 0.0603063233224 118% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0836968089848 0.12726935374 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0754787027974 0.0580467560999 130% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.9 8.37731958763 130% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 70.7449484536 87% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 7.45979381443 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.02 8.71597938144 126% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.65 7.59969072165 101% => OK
difficult_words: 52.0 41.2886597938 126% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 8.62886597938 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 8.54432989691 108% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 8.15463917526 135% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 87.0786516854 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.75 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.