Unfortunately, in contemporary society, creating an appealing image has become more important than the reality or truth behind that image.
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the statement and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and supporting your position, you should consider ways in which the statement might or might not hold true and explain how these considerations shape your position.
It is an undeniable fact that in modern society apealling in the look is more important than the nature of something. You can see this subject more closely in social media. In social media people try to show themself in a different ways. I strongly agree with this assertion for 3 reasons.
First of all, people are always concerned about the other's opinion and they afraid to feel and show themselves as they are.For example you see people post some photo in instagram not because they like that photo but because they want appreciation from other people. In the better word they seek attention from others.
Secondly, some people are shallow and do not even think about the sentiment behind things. They always consider the appearance of things and never think deeper to understand what is it behind that things and what that thing represent. For instance in some cases people talk about a book but the thing is they do not understand the main point of that writing and they only attracted to the appearance and the way the book was written.
Third of all, lack of knowledge led people to a point that they deceived easily and that flaws could be really beneficial for some group of people. For instance you can some company using some visually good aid to deceive people.
Although it could be really controversy things to accept but it is so sad that people do not think deep and could be easily deceived by the look of something and not the sentiment behind it.
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- TPO-3 Integrated writing 3
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 233, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[2]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'way'?
Suggestion: way
...ple try to show themself in a different ways. I strongly agree with this assertion f...
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Line 3, column 53, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'others'' or 'other's'?
Suggestion: others'; other's
..., people are always concerned about the others opinion and they afraid to feel and sho...
^^^^^^
Line 3, column 72, Rule ID: I_AFRAID[2]
Message: You miss the verb here. You should rather write: 'they're afraid'.
Suggestion: they're afraid
... concerned about the others opinion and they afraid to feel and show themselves as they are...
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Line 3, column 124, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: For
...to feel and show themselves as they are.For example you see people post some photo ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, look, really, second, secondly, so, third, for example, for instance, first of all, in some cases
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 19.5258426966 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 12.4196629213 40% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 14.8657303371 87% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 11.3162921348 71% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 29.0 33.0505617978 88% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 58.6224719101 58% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 9.0 12.9106741573 70% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1227.0 2235.4752809 55% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 260.0 442.535393258 59% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.71923076923 5.05705443957 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.01553427287 4.55969084622 88% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.31617351753 2.79657885939 83% => OK
Unique words: 133.0 215.323595506 62% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.511538461538 0.4932671777 104% => OK
syllable_count: 367.2 704.065955056 52% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.59117977528 88% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 6.24550561798 64% => OK
Article: 0.0 4.99550561798 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.10617977528 32% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.38483146067 46% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 20.2370786517 59% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 23.0359550562 91% => OK
Sentence length SD: 66.27022752 60.3974514979 110% => OK
Chars per sentence: 102.25 118.986275619 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.6666666667 23.4991977007 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.41666666667 5.21951772744 180% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 7.80617977528 51% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 10.2758426966 68% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 5.13820224719 19% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.83258426966 83% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0725875080644 0.243740707755 30% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0350784782732 0.0831039109588 42% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0381515644761 0.0758088955206 50% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0447016855801 0.150359130593 30% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0465784518221 0.0667264976115 70% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.6 14.1392134831 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 67.08 48.8420337079 137% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.92365168539 39% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 12.1743820225 75% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.1 12.1639044944 83% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.41 8.38706741573 88% => OK
difficult_words: 45.0 100.480337079 45% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 11.8971910112 63% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 11.2143820225 93% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.7820224719 68% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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