All education, primary, secondary and further education, should be free to all people and paid for by the government.
Do you agree or disagree with this statement?
Different countries have different education systems. I don‛t know all the education systems in the world but all the ones I do know about have free school education at primary and secondary level. I certainly agree with the statement that this should be the case. I believe university education is different.
No matter what standard of income someone has or what society someone comes from, everyone should have the opportunity to have a good standard of education. This is not always what happens but it is what should happen. Private schools can be available for those who want and can afford...
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- Universities should accept equal numbers of male and female students in every subject To what extent do you agree or disagree 81
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