You want to sell your television. You think a friend of yours might like to buy it from you.
Write a letter to your friend. In your letter explain
Why you are selling the television
Describe the television
Suggest a date when your friend can come and see it
Dear Amanda,
I hope this letter finds you in radiant health and the best of spirits. You remember, a few days back you told me about purchasing a second-hand TV for your living room. Surprisingly, I am selling mine television because I need to arrange some immediate funds for my sister's education. Please allow me to elaborate details of the television.
To begin with, the model number of the television is SAMSUNG XP104, 21-inch display, Dolby sound, full internet connectivity and with the support of the HDMI port. Moreover, it is just 1 year old, although the selling price of the TV is 8,000 INR for other people, for you the best price is 6,500 INR. I hope this television will meet your requirements.
If you want to see the TV, please let me know your availability between 13th to 20th May, after that, I am traveling to a different province so I shall not be present at the home. My home address is the same as earlier only floor number is changed from 3rd to 2nd Floor. You can ring me before coming so that I'll pick you easily.
Hoping to see you soon.
Yours lovingly,
Rekha Rastogi
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 72, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...se let me know your availability between 13th May - 20th May, after that I am tra...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, may, moreover, second, so, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.48453608247 94% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 4.92783505155 122% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 5.05154639175 40% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 32.9175257732 91% => OK
Preposition: 21.0 26.3917525773 80% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.85567010309 26% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 919.0 937.175257732 98% => OK
No of words: 199.0 206.0 97% => OK
Chars per words: 4.61809045226 4.54256449028 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.75589349951 3.78020617076 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.55330667958 2.54303337028 100% => OK
Unique words: 136.0 127.690721649 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.683417085427 0.622605031667 110% => OK
syllable_count: 267.3 290.88556701 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 3.0 1.83505154639 163% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 16.3608247423 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.767019821 44.8134815571 109% => OK
Chars per sentence: 76.5833333333 76.5299724578 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.5833333333 16.8248392259 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.66666666667 4.34317383033 84% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 7.41237113402 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.306793604651 0.216113520407 142% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.109743182061 0.0766984524023 143% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0743045410778 0.0603063233224 123% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.178000820943 0.12726935374 140% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0443795958056 0.0580467560999 76% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.6 8.37731958763 103% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 80.62 70.7449484536 114% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.0 7.45979381443 80% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.22 8.71597938144 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.29 7.59969072165 96% => OK
difficult_words: 36.0 41.2886597938 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 8.62886597938 99% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 8.54432989691 98% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.