The animal species are becoming extinct due to human activities on land and in the sea. What are the reasons and solutions?
Many people hold the belief that human projects drive terrestrial and marine animals to the brink of extinction. This can stem from many causes, which calls for possible solutions to be adopted.
There are several factors responsible for this extirpation, the most important of which is the lack of governmental control. This gives rise to illegal poaching and logging, thereby contributing to deforestation and the loss of biodiversity. Over time, as a result, many species are imperiled by rampant habitat destruction and therefore are on the brink of extinction. Moreover, as for some enterprises, they deliberately discharge chemical waste and sewage into rivers. Such waste discharges may contain organic matter which is highly polluting to watercourses and toxic to many forms of marine life, hence mass fish and aquatic creature deaths.
There are several measures which can be taken to solve this issue. To begin with, if the government imposes stringent punishments on illegal poachers and loggers, it will act as a deterrent to potential offenders and former convicts. For example, in Vietnam, law-breakers can receive imprisonment for illegal hunting rhinos which have been putting on a red list recently due to poaching and animal smuggling. At the same time, severe financial penalties should be introduced for businesses dumping hazardous waste in the water. This can be exemplified by Vietnam, Vedan corporation, which is a chemical product corporation, was heavily fined for not managing rubbish and then pouring wastes into rivers and streams.
In conclusion, this problem results from many causes, and there are several activities that can be taken to address this issue.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 648, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... mass fish and aquatic creature deaths. There are several measures which can be ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, hence, if, may, moreover, so, then, therefore, as for, for example, in conclusion, as a result, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 11.0 24.0651302605 46% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 41.998997996 76% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1431.0 1615.20841683 89% => OK
No of words: 264.0 315.596192385 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.42045454545 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03089032464 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.88859722295 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 162.0 176.041082164 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.613636363636 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 445.5 506.74238477 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 35.6719106175 49.4020404114 72% => OK
Chars per sentence: 110.076923077 106.682146367 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.3076923077 20.7667163134 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.76923076923 7.06120827912 124% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0570750749212 0.244688304435 23% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0213181403825 0.084324248473 25% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0297266149611 0.0667982634062 45% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0432843690567 0.151304729494 29% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0294011762521 0.056905535591 52% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.3 13.0946893788 109% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 50.2224549098 85% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.16 12.4159519038 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.95 8.58950901804 116% => OK
difficult_words: 89.0 78.4519038076 113% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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