Some people say that the main environmental problem of our time is the loss of particular species of plants and animals. Others say that there are more important environmental problems.
Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
at this century, many human's activities threat earth and our environment. Some people think the most important problem is the extinction of the animal and pants. Another group of people believes, there are some problems that are more important.
In our time many species of animals and plants are lost. However, it is very painful that some creatures do not live on the earth anymore but there are still many more important problems such as global warming that are unsolved. Global warming is one of the most dangerous phenomena at this time. The reason for many natural disasters is global warming. For instance, big Earthquakes or heavy floods raise from global warming. Furthermore, global warming is a cause of extinction of many species. Some animals or plants cannot change themselves according to new environmental changes.
In addition, people and factories pollute water and air more than in the past. Today each person with his/her personal car has a profit to air pollution. Likewise, many industrial companies and factories impose their pollution in seas or rivers. These activities are harmful to humans and other creatures.
In my opinion, the extinction of animals and plants is very painful and it is our duty that we protect them but there are also some problems that are more important and can affect humans and other species lives. If people can cut some of these problems, the earth will be a safer place for all creatures.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: At
at this century, many humans activities th...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, however, if, likewise, so, still, for instance, in addition, such as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 10.4138276553 154% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 22.0 41.998997996 52% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1212.0 1615.20841683 75% => OK
No of words: 241.0 315.596192385 76% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.02904564315 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.94007293032 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.55633317003 2.80592935109 91% => OK
Unique words: 131.0 176.041082164 74% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.54356846473 0.561755894193 97% => OK
syllable_count: 382.5 506.74238477 75% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 40.7208005048 49.4020404114 82% => OK
Chars per sentence: 75.75 106.682146367 71% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.0625 20.7667163134 73% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.6875 7.06120827912 95% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 11.0 3.9879759519 276% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.246227874337 0.244688304435 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0796968710143 0.084324248473 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0665872987955 0.0667982634062 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.157069628062 0.151304729494 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0695167462853 0.056905535591 122% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.8 13.0946893788 75% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 56.25 50.2224549098 112% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.3 12.4159519038 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.79 8.58950901804 91% => OK
difficult_words: 52.0 78.4519038076 66% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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