Although the idea that the extinction of a peculiar class of herbs and creatures is the biggest problem of our time is argued by some people, others believe that more critical habitual obstacles should be considered. Nature is in its equilibrium with all its creatures which should be alive to sustain it. However, in my opinion, climate change, pollution, and greenhouse gas emission are more important problems and had to be taken seriously.
On the one hand, a specific class of animals and plants are very important for nature because they make the soil more productive. Therefore, the extinction of them is a crucial problem for agriculture. In addition to that, each creature depends on other creatures to become existing. There are chained connections among them. The loss of one critical class put others in danger. For example, decreasing the number of bees is very dangerous for nature.
On the other hand, earth has a different kinds of problems which may be more critical. Pandemic is the biggest problem in the world now. It has affected all people's life. Governments have been working on that problem however they could not find a long-life solution. Climate change will prevent people to reach vital resources in near future. People will suffer from lack of water and drought more. Furthermore, another big problem is an increase in greenhouse gas emissions which also cause climate change. Because of overuse of fossil fuels and overconsumption of beef, greenhouse gas emission is rising. Governments should take necessary cautions for greenhouse gas emission and the possibility of pandemics because of new or mutated viruses.
To conclude, human beings have to deal with lots of complications in time to come. The extinction of special plants and animals is a very critical problem. Whereas, what I believe is that, there are more crucial topics such as climate change, increase in greenhouse gas emission, and pandemic.
- An increasing number of people now prefer to go shopping in supermarkets rather than small shops and local markets Is this a positive or negative development 70
- The chart below shows the value of one country s exports in various categories during 2015 and 2016 The table shows the percentage change in each category of exports in 2016 compared with 2015 73
- In some cultures children are often told that they can achieve anything if they try hard enough What are the advantages and disadvantages of giving children this massage 67
- Some people say that the main environmental problem of our time is the loss of particular species of plants and animals Others say that there are more important environmental problems Discuss both these views and give your own opinion 73
- IELTS Writing Task 1 Percentages of Sodium Saturated Fats Sugars in Meals 67
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 42, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[2]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'kind'?
Suggestion: kind
...n the other hand, earth has a different kinds of problems which may be more critical....
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, furthermore, however, if, may, so, therefore, whereas, for example, in addition, such as, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 13.1623246493 144% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1632.0 1615.20841683 101% => OK
No of words: 316.0 315.596192385 100% => OK
Chars per words: 5.16455696203 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.21620550194 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.75068271667 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 174.0 176.041082164 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.550632911392 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 511.2 506.74238477 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 16.0721442886 131% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 41.3471010645 49.4020404114 84% => OK
Chars per sentence: 77.7142857143 106.682146367 73% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.0476190476 20.7667163134 72% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.09523809524 7.06120827912 86% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 12.0 3.9879759519 301% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.188964516405 0.244688304435 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0572775607283 0.084324248473 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0487166604644 0.0667982634062 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.115953876245 0.151304729494 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0168750029887 0.056905535591 30% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.4 13.0946893788 79% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 56.25 50.2224549098 112% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.06 12.4159519038 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.28 8.58950901804 96% => OK
difficult_words: 78.0 78.4519038076 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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