Many offenders commit more crimes after serving the first punishment. Why is this happening, and what measures can be taken to tackle the problem?
It is certainly true that there are more repeat offenders after completing their first sentence. This is mainly because of lack of rehabilatation in prison and difficulty landing a job. There are two solutions which should be implemented by the government to deter them from committing crimes.
Many first time criminals repeats the same crime shortly after they have been released. This maybe caused by a variety of reasons. Firstly, is the failure of the authority to rehabilitate them. This means that there are less programs focusing on the needs of prisoners. Secondly, they are having hard time looking for work because of the negative image and trust issues in the society. Without any source of income or financial support to feed their families and loved ones, they may consider the easy and illegal way to earn a living. Lastly, peer pressure from other offenders has a negative effect that may lead to another crime.
There are two effective solutions to this problem. One way to tackle this issue is for the government to focus on providing seminars and workshops to prisoners while they are serving their punishment. rehabilitation programs such as weekly visit to a psychologist prepares them emotionally and psychologically in their integration back to the community. Another possible method is to tain them with new skills. For instance, prisoners in Malaysia are taught how to hand weave baskets and bags. The skills learned will equip them in finding paid employment after their released.
In conclusion, the lack of proper rehabilitation in prison and financial challenges are factors that forces repeat offenders in committing crimes, and the best ways to prevent this from happening are by continuous counselling and teaching them new life skills.
- In many cities, many people are living in large apartment blocks. Does this accommodation have more advantages or disadvantages? 78
- With an increasing population communicating via the internet and text messaging, face to face communication will became a thing of the past. To what extent do you agree? 78
- Completing university education is thought by some to be the best way to get a good job. On the other hand, other people think that getting exeprience and developing soft skills is more important. Discuss both views and given your opinion. 61
- Many people believe that social networking sites (such as Facebook) have had a huge negative impact on both individuals and society.To what extent do you agree? 73
- Some people believe that nowadays we have too many choices. To what extent do you agree or disagree. 61
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 221, Rule ID: FEWER_LESS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'fewer'? The noun programs is countable.
Suggestion: fewer
...ilitate them. This means that there are less programs focusing on the needs of priso...
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Line 5, column 202, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Rehabilitation
...hile they are serving their punishment. rehabilitation programs such as weekly visit to a psyc...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, if, lastly, look, may, second, secondly, so, while, for instance, in conclusion, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1492.0 1615.20841683 92% => OK
No of words: 286.0 315.596192385 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.21678321678 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11236361783 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.80313182822 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 168.0 176.041082164 95% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.587412587413 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 463.5 506.74238477 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 50.9127077087 49.4020404114 103% => OK
Chars per sentence: 87.7647058824 106.682146367 82% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.8235294118 20.7667163134 81% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.11764705882 7.06120827912 87% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 3.9879759519 226% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.190464092041 0.244688304435 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.056590375264 0.084324248473 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0550319696958 0.0667982634062 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.113190001704 0.151304729494 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.035941037325 0.056905535591 63% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.6 13.0946893788 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 50.2224549098 110% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.7 12.4159519038 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.9 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 81.0 78.4519038076 103% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 9.78957915832 61% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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