Many governments think that economic progress is their most important goal. Some people, however, think that other types of progress are equally important for a country. Discuss both views and given your opinion.
Many governments around the world believes that their main focus is the growth of a healthy economy. Others argued that there are other industry and sector that should be given equal importance. In my opinion, I agree that the government should strive for economic developments for its people.
One of the main reasons why government should focus mainly on economic developments is that when an economy progress, other areas follows. For instance, Multi-national companies investing in developing countries creates wider opportunities for the people. Firstly, there will be more jobs around the country. This means that more families will bw able to finance their needs and thus, will no longer depends on government's support. Secondly, the money allocated in developing infrastructures and building faster and safer roads will consequently provides a smooth transaction of businesses in the country. Lastly, a healthy economy ensures the people that the nation is stable and that they do not have to worry for the future of the next generation.
On the other hand, some people believed that there are other areas that need to develop aswell. In developing countries, there was a little support form the government to its national athletes. Often times, these athletes compete abroad with less training and financial support tat may lead to poor performance and disappointments from their own country. Government should give importance to their national athletes as the represent the country as a whole.
In conclusion, I belive that the government ought to focus on providing a secure economy that is healthy and progressive to ensure the citizens of a better standard of living.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 55, Rule ID: MAIN_FOCUS[1]
Message: Use simply 'focus'.
Suggestion: focus
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Line 1, column 150, Rule ID: THERE_RE_MANY[3]
Message: Possible agreement error. Did you mean 'sectors'?
Suggestion: sectors
...rgued that there are other industry and sector that should be given equal importance. ...
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Line 3, column 547, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'will' requires the base form of the verb: 'provide'
Suggestion: provide
...aster and safer roads will consequently provides a smooth transaction of businesses in t...
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Line 3, column 707, Rule ID: WORRY_FOR[1]
Message: The verb 'worry' does not normally take the preposition 'for'. Did you mean 'worry about'?
Suggestion: worry about
... is stable and that they do not have to worry for the future of the next generation. O...
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Line 5, column 420, Rule ID: A_INFINITVE[1]
Message: Probably a wrong construction: a/the + infinitive
...mportance to their national athletes as the represent the country as a whole. In conclusio...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
consequently, first, firstly, lastly, may, second, secondly, so, thus, well, for instance, in conclusion, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 7.30460921844 178% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 41.998997996 67% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1423.0 1615.20841683 88% => OK
No of words: 267.0 315.596192385 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.32958801498 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.04229324003 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.87724316737 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 153.0 176.041082164 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.573033707865 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 437.4 506.74238477 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 33.8987086624 49.4020404114 69% => OK
Chars per sentence: 101.642857143 106.682146367 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.0714285714 20.7667163134 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.85714285714 7.06120827912 140% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.227675849084 0.244688304435 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0761169501324 0.084324248473 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0451449110995 0.0667982634062 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.137094495877 0.151304729494 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0546831773547 0.056905535591 96% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.2 13.0946893788 101% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.63 12.4159519038 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.25 8.58950901804 108% => OK
difficult_words: 79.0 78.4519038076 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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