You are going to travel abroad for two months, and while you are away a friend would like to live in your apartment. Write to the owner of the apartment explaining the situation.
In your letter
Explain that you are going to travel abroad
Describe your friend and say why he would be a good tenant
Ask whether the owner will agree to this
Dear Mr. Smith,
I am writing to inform you about my absence for two months. I will go to China next Friday as my company delegate. This commission will take two months. I was wondering if it would be possible for you to let my friend live in my apartment in this period.
She is one of my close friends. we were classmate during our pedagogical years. So I know and trust her. She lives alone and has a popular restaurant in the city. Because she spends most of her time at her restaurants, she will come to my house only for sleep. As a result, I promise that she does not irritate you. In addition, she will pay full rents and charges before her settlements so that it will not cause you any inconvenience in the case you cannot reach her properly.
I would be extremely grateful if you accept my request and it does not cause you any inconvenience. I look forward to receiving your response.
Kind regards,
Helia Hosseini
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 32, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: We
...eriod. She is one of my close friends. we were classmate during our pedagogical y...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, look, so, in addition, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.48453608247 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 4.92783505155 162% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 42.0 32.9175257732 128% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 16.0 26.3917525773 61% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.85567010309 130% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 762.0 937.175257732 81% => OK
No of words: 172.0 206.0 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.43023255814 4.54256449028 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.62144681703 3.78020617076 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.58534686035 2.54303337028 102% => OK
Unique words: 111.0 127.690721649 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.645348837209 0.622605031667 104% => OK
syllable_count: 238.5 290.88556701 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 9.13402061856 131% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 12.6804123711 110% => OK
Sentence length: 12.0 16.3608247423 73% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 36.9188298839 44.8134815571 82% => OK
Chars per sentence: 54.4285714286 76.5299724578 71% => OK
Words per sentence: 12.2857142857 16.8248392259 73% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.71428571429 4.34317383033 62% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.29896907216 70% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.94845360825 127% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.223508251438 0.216113520407 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0699832591172 0.0766984524023 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0648010739628 0.0603063233224 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.168715148335 0.12726935374 133% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.067472489451 0.0580467560999 116% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 5.6 8.37731958763 67% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 76.22 70.7449484536 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 5.6 7.45979381443 75% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.53 8.71597938144 86% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.8 7.59969072165 89% => OK
difficult_words: 28.0 41.2886597938 68% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 4.5 8.62886597938 52% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 6.8 8.54432989691 80% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 8.15463917526 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 64.606741573 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.75 Out of 9
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