You recently moved to a new address. You want to tell a friend who lives in another city about your new home. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter:
Explain why you moved
Describe your new home
Invite your friend to visit you
Dear Sue,
I hope you’re doing fine these days. I am writing to let you know about my new home. As you know, I lived in a small flat in a highrise building near my work office. But this wasn’t convenient for me anymore because my company moved to another area, which was thirty minutes driving from my older living place. So, I decided to move to another site.
My new home is located in one of the cozy streets of the city. In contrast with the previous one, which did not have enough light, this has full-screen glasses. So I don’t have to pay a high power bill. Also, as you know, I am keen on gardening, and my new home has a small courtyard, which I decorated with my favorite plants and flowers. I'm not telling you anymore because you have to come by and see that in person.
I want to hold a party for my birthday next month and would love it if you could come. My place is specious enough for both of us. We can have a good time together.
I look forward to catching up with you soon.
All the best,
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 66, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[2]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: contrast,
...one of the cozy streets of the city. In contrast with the previous one, which did not ha...
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Line 3, column 345, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: I'm
...ed with my favorite plants and flowers. Im not telling you anymore because you hav...
^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, look, so, in contrast, you know
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 7.48453608247 40% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 34.0 32.9175257732 103% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 26.3917525773 99% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.85567010309 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 832.0 937.175257732 89% => OK
No of words: 198.0 206.0 96% => OK
Chars per words: 4.20202020202 4.54256449028 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.75116612262 3.78020617076 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.28967864628 2.54303337028 90% => OK
Unique words: 128.0 127.690721649 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.646464646465 0.622605031667 104% => OK
syllable_count: 261.9 290.88556701 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.13402061856 120% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.463917525773 431% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 12.6804123711 118% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 16.3608247423 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 36.6469037649 44.8134815571 82% => OK
Chars per sentence: 55.4666666667 76.5299724578 72% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.2 16.8248392259 78% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.06666666667 4.34317383033 71% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 7.41237113402 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 3.94845360825 228% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.194965128395 0.216113520407 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0712878433789 0.0766984524023 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.06868113366 0.0603063233224 114% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.119494607312 0.12726935374 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0481595513252 0.0580467560999 83% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 5.0 8.37731958763 60% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 83.66 70.7449484536 118% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 4.8 7.45979381443 64% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 6.19 8.71597938144 71% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.67 7.59969072165 88% => OK
difficult_words: 30.0 41.2886597938 73% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 8.62886597938 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.2 8.54432989691 84% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 8.15463917526 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.