Many people try to look younger than their age. What are the reasons people do this? Do you think this is a good thing or a bad thing?
The way one looks plays a key role in today’s world, as people often judge others based on their looks. For this reason, people try various ways to give an impression by looking younger. There are several reasons for this trend and I think, this is toxic to the society as it has detrimental affects on physical as well as mental health.
To commence, as people age, it is natural for the skin to form wrinkles and hair to turn grey. However, people find it difficult to accept this fact as they feel their importance is being lost in the society with every new generation that comes. In addition to this, cosmetics companies are trying to turn this obsession of people favourable to them by manufacturing anti-aging creams and hair dyes. To illustrate, in the last decade, the sales of anti-aging creams and Botox treatments have sky rocketed by featuring famous movie stars, whose only ambition is to look young. Thus, all these factors are creating a compulsion in individuals to appear youthful.
Nevertheless, people who are undergoing mid-life crisis are succumbed to the cosmetic industry strategy. Despite realising genes play a significant role in the way one looks, people are spending extravagantly on treatments. For example, recently botox has become popular with the glamour field, although there are reported cases that it has the tendency to cause paralysis. Admittedly, celebrities posting pictures of their flawless looks is developing inferiority complex in individuals and are eventually getting depressed. Therefore, this trend poses a serious threat to the society.
To conclude, as people has an underlying desire to look young, beauty industry is encashing this weakness of people. Therefore, several detrimental affects on physical and mental health are caused when individuals are obsessed with young looks.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, look, nevertheless, so, therefore, thus, well, for example, i think, in addition, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 7.85571142285 0% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1555.0 1615.20841683 96% => OK
No of words: 295.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.27118644068 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14434120667 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.81354706961 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 176.0 176.041082164 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.596610169492 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 477.0 506.74238477 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 31.8031444986 49.4020404114 64% => OK
Chars per sentence: 103.666666667 106.682146367 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.6666666667 20.7667163134 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.0 7.06120827912 99% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.284675282381 0.244688304435 116% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0937284653932 0.084324248473 111% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0775297636614 0.0667982634062 116% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.172785352125 0.151304729494 114% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0759739347651 0.056905535591 134% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.2 13.0946893788 101% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.29 12.4159519038 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.4 8.58950901804 109% => OK
difficult_words: 90.0 78.4519038076 115% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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