Essay topics:
Write a letter to request annual leave for marriage in professional way to MD
Dear Sir/Madam,
I am writing to request your approval for me to commence my annual leave. While I understand that this is not the appropriate time to proceed on such leave, it is needed now for me to adequately prepare and conduct my marriage ceremony, which comes up in a few months from now.
I have made all the necessary plan to ensure my duties does not suffer while I am away and I will keep my lines open to attend to any urgent inquiry with regards to my job.
Thanks for your understanding and consideration.
Yours faithfully,
Shaik Hussain Basha.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 16, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Dear Sir/Madam, I am writing to request your approval fo...
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Line 10, column 18, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... and consideration. Yours faithfully, Shaik Hussain Basha.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 2.0 7.48453608247 27% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 4.92783505155 20% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 5.05154639175 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 32.9175257732 55% => OK
Preposition: 13.0 26.3917525773 49% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 476.0 937.175257732 51% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 101.0 206.0 49% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.71287128713 4.54256449028 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.17015387972 3.78020617076 84% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.72001660732 2.54303337028 107% => OK
Unique words: 75.0 127.690721649 59% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.742574257426 0.622605031667 119% => OK
syllable_count: 147.6 290.88556701 51% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 9.13402061856 44% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 5.0 12.6804123711 39% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 16.3608247423 122% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 65.1723867907 44.8134815571 145% => OK
Chars per sentence: 95.2 76.5299724578 124% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.2 16.8248392259 120% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.0 4.34317383033 23% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.29896907216 70% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 7.41237113402 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.94845360825 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.121700498884 0.216113520407 56% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0699222869921 0.0766984524023 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0753687421541 0.0603063233224 125% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0826776491076 0.12726935374 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0697837574017 0.0580467560999 120% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.9 8.37731958763 130% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 70.7449484536 84% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 7.45979381443 133% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.04 8.71597938144 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.54 7.59969072165 112% => OK
difficult_words: 25.0 41.2886597938 61% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 8.62886597938 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 8.54432989691 117% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 8.15463917526 123% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 150 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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