Some people say that the Internet provides people with a lot of valuable information. Others think access to much information creates problems. Which view do you agree with? Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
Without any doubt, the internet is the most influential medium in the world. Every person, young and old, can get access to this vast source of data. It cannot be ignored that the internet has made the most significant progress within our society by providing plentiful and valuable information. However, this tremendous accessible knowledge can cause us too many inconveniences.
People can be confused by facing these various sources. This variation of information can make users confused and makes it hard to decide whether the information they are seeking is authentic or not. Internet is an open source data, which every individual can reach or change. Consequently, even a person without any academic education or with rudimentary knowledge can spread his ideas on the internet. By this trend, ordinary users, who are looking for their answers on the internet might be misled to the wrong direction and are not able to use the internet properly.
Additionally, too much access to information on the internet can lead to information misuse. Many people share their personal status or life stories on the internet. Therefore, these pieces of information can be abused by people who have destructive intentions. Many marriages or relationships fall apart because of this situation. A few years ago, a person hacked US intelligent service organization to share those data on the internet. As a result, all the information that was considered classified has revealed.
Finally, accessible information on the internet can lead to Plagiarism. Every year, a lot of essays or novels circulate on the internet. It is prevalent for students to copy their essays or school projects from the internet, but when it comes to literary novels or scientific research project, innovation is the top priority and replicating is forbidden. Copyright is a legitimate right for any author, which can be violated on the internet by anyone who has access to the internet. During my college years, even though I could find any essay or sample work on the internet, as I mentioned above, it was against the law to use that information for my personal purposes.
To conclude the discussion, the accessible information on the internet even though provides many positive effects in our life; it can be abused or misled by the same people who use it in the wrong direction.
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- TOEFL T P O 47 - Integrated Writing Task 3
- Many parts of the world are losing important natural resources, such as forests, animals, or clean water. Choose one resource that is disappearing and explain why it needs to be saved. Use specific reasons and examples to support your opinion. 76
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, consequently, finally, however, if, look, so, then, therefore, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 15.1003584229 119% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 9.8082437276 143% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 13.8261648746 116% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 11.0286738351 91% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 43.0788530466 72% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 52.1666666667 86% => OK
Nominalization: 17.0 8.0752688172 211% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1970.0 1977.66487455 100% => OK
No of words: 385.0 407.700716846 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.11688311688 4.8611393121 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.4296068528 4.48103885553 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.92495673486 2.67179642975 109% => OK
Unique words: 200.0 212.727598566 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.519480519481 0.524837075471 99% => OK
syllable_count: 639.9 618.680645161 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.51630824373 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.59856630824 73% => OK
Article: 5.0 3.08781362007 162% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 20.6003584229 102% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.1344086022 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.0845815634 48.9658058833 98% => OK
Chars per sentence: 93.8095238095 100.406767564 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.3333333333 20.6045352989 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.7619047619 5.45110844103 69% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.5376344086 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 11.8709677419 51% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.85842293907 156% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 4.88709677419 184% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.199655932248 0.236089414692 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0661733043092 0.076458572812 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0402503623229 0.0737576698707 55% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.124486849478 0.150856017488 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0206195345288 0.0645574589148 32% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.9 11.7677419355 101% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.75 58.1214874552 77% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 10.1575268817 113% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.42 10.9000537634 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.75 8.01818996416 109% => OK
difficult_words: 103.0 86.8835125448 119% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 10.002688172 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.0537634409 92% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.247311828 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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