Some people think that they can learn better by themselves than with teacher. others think that it is always better to have a teacher. which one do you prefer?
assumptions of learning without any others help may push someone into unknown problems, where as having one to correct our mistakes and support us when we assimilate a new skill or gain knowledge about something we don't know might help people in many ways, a so-called teacher is the one who earns his name with the experience he has, hence we should have a teacher on our side to learn something fresh. some of the explanations and examples are as follows.
categorized group of youth in many colleges and schools form a gang and influence others not to listen to any well-wisher or a person who tries to teach good manners about acquiring talents by hard work, alongside they involve in activities such as assault and bullying which results in making them failures for the whole of their life. For instance, a friend of my buddy never learned anything and remained in the 9th standard for 2 years and habituated for smoking and boozing and he commands my friend to do the same.
if we have a glimpse on the other side, a teacher always explains everything in detail for whatever we would learn despite difficulties he pursues because it is his or her duty for making us understand the proficiency behind a task, if we do not have guidance about driving a car we could make it a bad day with some accident in the middle of the road, in the same way knowing a chore or a piece of work we should consider taking assistance from a teacher of the related subject. For example, a study on university teachers and students revealed that youngsters become scholars only when they get great support from teachers, on the other hand, class fellows who never listened or depended upon their self-knowledge never crossed their standards.
To wind this up, it is a good thing to have a mentor who takes care of us when we go wrong rather than striving alone to come out from the issue that bothers us.
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...triving alone to come out from the issue that bothers us.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
hence, if, may, so, well, for example, for instance, such as, in the same way, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 13.1623246493 30% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 35.0 24.0651302605 145% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 47.0 41.998997996 112% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1561.0 1615.20841683 97% => OK
No of words: 339.0 315.596192385 107% => OK
Chars per words: 4.60471976401 5.12529762239 90% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.29091512845 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.54929045826 2.80592935109 91% => OK
Unique words: 205.0 176.041082164 116% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.604719764012 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 483.3 506.74238477 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 16.0721442886 44% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 48.0 20.2975951904 236% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 137.3498438 49.4020404114 278% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 223.0 106.682146367 209% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 48.4285714286 20.7667163134 233% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 13.7142857143 7.06120827912 194% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.01903807615 159% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.189582218549 0.244688304435 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0775127740276 0.084324248473 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.048677305703 0.0667982634062 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.105387102166 0.151304729494 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.058758638382 0.056905535591 103% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 24.5 13.0946893788 187% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 39.68 50.2224549098 79% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 19.6 11.3001002004 173% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.29 12.4159519038 83% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.14 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 67.0 78.4519038076 85% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 18.0 9.78957915832 184% => OK
gunning_fog: 21.2 10.1190380762 210% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.