You saw a brochure for a one-week walking tour in the mountains. You're very interested in taking part, but you're not very fit and are worried you wouldn't be able to keep up. Write to the tour operator. In your letter:
• Explain why you're interested in the tour.
• Ask for information about dates and prices.
• Express your concerns about your fitness level.
This is in regards to One-week walking tour in the mountains which I saw in one of the brochure published this week. I am 28 Years old and live in Jaipur, Rajasthan. I am very much interested in taking part in this tour as I am fond of adventure since childhood. I have been to some trips during school days which were also adventurous at some extent. since then I have never planed for a tour or trip. I think this would be an important opportunity for me to live the life in my way.
As I am interested in this tour, I would request you to send the important details about this tour which was not mentioned in the brochure. Below are the details which is required.
1) Dates on which this tour is organised.
2) Price of the tour package.
I also would like to bring into your notice that I am diabetic because of which I have health concerns. I am a little obese because of which I get tired really fast. Though I want to be on this tour as it is lifetime opportunity. I am little worried about my health and would not be able to keep up. Kindly share suggestions what am i supposed to do in this case.
Yours faithfully,
Prateek Nayyar
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 9, Rule ID: IN_REGARD_TO[1]
Message: Use simply 'regarding' or 'with regard to'.
Suggestion: regarding; with regard to
This is in regards to One-week walking tour in the mountains ...
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Line 1, column 264, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...I am fond of adventure since childhood. I have been to some trips during school d...
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Line 1, column 353, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Since
...h were also adventurous at some extent. since then I have never planed for a tour or ...
^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, really, so, then, i suppose, i think
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 7.48453608247 147% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 5.05154639175 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 3.03092783505 264% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 34.0 32.9175257732 103% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 26.3917525773 133% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.85567010309 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 942.0 937.175257732 101% => OK
No of words: 219.0 206.0 106% => OK
Chars per words: 4.30136986301 4.54256449028 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.84690116678 3.78020617076 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.48778421216 2.54303337028 98% => OK
Unique words: 121.0 127.690721649 95% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.552511415525 0.622605031667 89% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 292.5 290.88556701 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.13402061856 109% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.83505154639 163% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 12.6804123711 126% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 16.3608247423 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 30.7039797909 44.8134815571 69% => OK
Chars per sentence: 58.875 76.5299724578 77% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.6875 16.8248392259 81% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.875 4.34317383033 66% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 2.54639175258 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.94845360825 152% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.172133741411 0.216113520407 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0570148338656 0.0766984524023 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0541493262409 0.0603063233224 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0953428160363 0.12726935374 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0341258368606 0.0580467560999 59% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 5.7 8.37731958763 68% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 83.66 70.7449484536 118% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 4.8 7.45979381443 64% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.07 8.71597938144 81% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.66 7.59969072165 88% => OK
difficult_words: 33.0 41.2886597938 80% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 8.62886597938 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.2 8.54432989691 84% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 8.15463917526 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.