You have recently moved to a different house. Write a letter to an English-speaking friend.
Explain why you have moved
Describe a new house
Invite your friend to come and visit
Dear Mat,
Hope you are doing well. I am writing to inform you that I have recently moved to a new house in the suburbs of the city. Let me explain to you in detail.
To elucidate my previous apartment was a studio hence there were space constraints, therefore, it was difficult to accommodate guests. Additionally, the apartment was without any modern amenities like swimming pool, gymnasium. Although there were other reasons too for changing my house however the biggest reason was the distance from the office due to which I was not able to dedicate time to my leisure activities. The new house is a three bedroom apartment located in the suburbs of the city with all the modern amenities like a health club, swimming pool, 24 hours security and a gymnasium. since the apartment is located in the serene vicinity of the Arravalis it provides a panoramic view of lush green forest.
Why don't you to pay us a visit next week? since I have already moved to my new house. I am sure you will like my new house. I am also inviting Sara and Paddy for a house warming party.
Looking forward to seeing you next week.
warm wishes
Saad
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 597, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Since
...ool, 24 hours security and a gymnasium. since the apartment is located in the serene ...
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Line 4, column 597, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “since” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...ool, 24 hours security and a gymnasium. since the apartment is located in the serene ...
^^^^^
Line 6, column 5, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
...ramic view of lush green forest. Why dont you to pay us a visit next week? since ...
^^^^
Line 6, column 43, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Since
...y dont you to pay us a visit next week? since I have already moved to my new house. I...
^^^^^
Line 6, column 43, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “since” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...y dont you to pay us a visit next week? since I have already moved to my new house. I...
^^^^^
Line 8, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Warm
...oking forward to seeing you next week. warm wishes Saad
^^^^
Line 8, column 12, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...rd to seeing you next week. warm wishes Saad
^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, hence, however, if, look, so, therefore, well
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 7.48453608247 134% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 4.92783505155 20% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 5.05154639175 40% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 32.9175257732 67% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 26.3917525773 102% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.85567010309 130% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 938.0 937.175257732 100% => OK
No of words: 204.0 206.0 99% => OK
Chars per words: 4.59803921569 4.54256449028 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.77926670891 3.78020617076 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.51556095236 2.54303337028 99% => OK
Unique words: 120.0 127.690721649 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.588235294118 0.622605031667 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 304.2 290.88556701 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 9.13402061856 44% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 3.0 1.83505154639 163% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 1.44329896907 208% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 12.6804123711 110% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 16.3608247423 86% => OK
Sentence length SD: 54.3751612712 44.8134815571 121% => OK
Chars per sentence: 67.0 76.5299724578 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.5714285714 16.8248392259 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.64285714286 4.34317383033 84% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 2.54639175258 275% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.94845360825 127% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.196359253876 0.216113520407 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0832716479997 0.0766984524023 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0946713106533 0.0603063233224 157% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.162329224199 0.12726935374 128% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.123443888454 0.0580467560999 213% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.5 8.37731958763 90% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 65.73 70.7449484536 93% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 7.45979381443 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.81 8.71597938144 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.43 7.59969072165 98% => OK
difficult_words: 40.0 41.2886597938 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 8.62886597938 93% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 8.54432989691 89% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.