Q .Shopping is now one of the most popular forms of leisure activity in many countries for young adults. Why is this ? is it a positive or negative development ?

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A. Nowadays ,it is undeniably true to see many young ...
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...r online or from brick and mortal stores .In my opinion, it is mere a peer pressu...
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... online or from brick and mortal stores .In my opinion, it is mere a peer pressur...
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...nline or from brick and mortal stores .In my opinion, it is mere a peer pressure ...
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... peer pressure which drags them to do so , and this invariably has given rise to ...
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... them to do so , and this invariably has given rise to a throwaway society ,which...
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...y has given rise to a throwaway society ,which is undoubtedly a negative repercus...
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...dly a negative repercussion. Recently ,shopping malls and high street markets ...
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... ,shopping malls and high street markets are overcrowded than ever before, especi...
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...ignificantly among youngsters and adults . People get influenced by their colleagu...
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...lleagues and friends and in order to get fit into the cohort they recklessly buy...
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...n order to get fit into the cohort they recklessly buy things whenever they are ...
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...nds and gadgets, they can be bullied by the people around them. This makes clear that people are addic...
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...become shopaholic to such an extent that , they not even think once before squand...
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...shopaholic to such an extent that , they not even think once before squandering m...
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... they already have at home. To exemplify ,in Times of india a article showed that ...
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...t home. To exemplify ,in Times of india a article showed that more than 60% peop...
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...,in Times of india a article showed that more than 60% people keep on updating t...
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...rticle showed that more than 60% people keep on updating their smart phones by b...
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...r smart phones by buying latest launched mobile phone ,despite having one in pres...
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... by buying latest launched mobile phone ,despite having one in prestine condition...
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...despite having one in prestine condition .Therefore, the company production has t...
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...spite having one in prestine condition .Therefore, the company production has to be incr...
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...estine condition .Therefore, the company production has to be increased proportio...
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...ncreased proportionately with the demand .Utlimately ,lot of non biodegradable was...
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...reased proportionately with the demand .Utlimately ,lot of non biodegradable waste is coll...
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...portionately with the demand .Utlimately ,lot of non biodegradable waste is collec...
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...lected while manufacturing and packaging , which remains in the environment for ye...
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...the major role in pooling people towards shopping ;however, the pollution which i...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, so, therefore, while, as to, in conclusion, in my opinion

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 7.85571142285 13% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1483.0 1615.20841683 92% => OK
No of words: 283.0 315.596192385 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.24028268551 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10153676581 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.81482642872 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 190.0 176.041082164 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.671378091873 0.561755894193 120% => OK
syllable_count: 452.7 506.74238477 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 28.0 20.2975951904 138% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 111.461383447 49.4020404114 226% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 148.3 106.682146367 139% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.3 20.7667163134 136% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.5 7.06120827912 106% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 29.0 5.01903807615 578% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.108909312852 0.244688304435 45% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0469975086346 0.084324248473 56% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0391122398874 0.0667982634062 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0715229475803 0.151304729494 47% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0191483065658 0.056905535591 34% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.4 13.0946893788 133% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.06 50.2224549098 86% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 11.3001002004 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.41 12.4159519038 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.54 8.58950901804 111% => OK
difficult_words: 81.0 78.4519038076 103% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.78957915832 148% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 10.1190380762 130% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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