Many Offenders commit more crime after serving the first punishments. Why is this happening and what measures can be taken to tackle this problems.
Increasing crime rate is a grave issue of any countries. A recent decades are witness of incline in crime sector. Amid this enhancement, there is one phenomenon that has associated with it. According to this phenomenon, criminal has selected this illegal activity after the punishment. There are plethora of evidence that why they follow that pattern. Not only the evidence but also some handful of measures are taken by government. I will try to throw light upon describe briefly both hypothesis. I also will try to posit my perspective about it.
To embark on, there are multifarious reasons to shore those people who are in favor of criminal always accept that way after the punishment. First and foremost evidence is that lack of education. To justify, perpetrators have scarce of know-how. Hence, they do not have any skill to get a job as well as they have floundered with financial condition which force them to follow the same illegal way to survive. The another conspicuous reason is that poverty. To be explained, people who live underline of poverty. They are far away from education and productive skills. Consequently, they are struggled from getting high position in any professions. Lastly, la-ac of intervention with community. Offenders have always got criticized due to their prior crime. Thereby, they are coerced by community delinquency to commit the crimes.
On the other side of spectrum, there are plethora of solutions to tackle the crime. Firstly, government should cater the education in imprisonment for allowing criminals to get better job after free from sentence. Secondly, the remarkable steps that can be taken by local authorities is that professions or organizations should be encouraged to expand or run more projects for rising the employment rate. Last but not the least, government should impose the strict rule to halt the juvenile delinquency. And always provide technological know-how and vocational training that criminals have the great job opportunities as well as they can grab this. With the help of this Education or productive skill.
Aggelomerating, all the points I elaborated an above that can be concluded that government should after better knowledge or education to reduce the crime rate. Not only local authorities can taken the steps but also community have to accepts them without criticize or appreciate them for their further life. That is why. I support those declaration that cure-all have been taken by all to mitigate the crime and it is more fruitful in my opinion.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: decade
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...ose the strict rule to halt the juvenile delinquency. And always provide technolo...
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Message: The verb after "to" should be in the base form: 'accept'.
Suggestion: accept
...en the steps but also community have to accepts them without criticize or appreciate th...
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Message: Did you mean 'this declaration' or 'those declarations'?
Suggestion: this declaration; those declarations
...ir further life. That is why. I support those declaration that cure-all have been taken by all to...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, briefly, but, consequently, first, firstly, hence, if, lastly, second, secondly, so, well, as well as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 21.0 13.1623246493 160% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 16.0 7.30460921844 219% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 41.0 24.0651302605 170% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 58.0 41.998997996 138% => OK
Nominalization: 22.0 8.3376753507 264% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2129.0 1615.20841683 132% => OK
No of words: 411.0 315.596192385 130% => OK
Chars per words: 5.1800486618 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.50256981431 4.20363070211 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.88575965109 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 219.0 176.041082164 124% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.532846715328 0.561755894193 95% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 684.0 506.74238477 135% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 29.0 16.0721442886 180% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 20.2975951904 69% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 43.5515193705 49.4020404114 88% => OK
Chars per sentence: 73.4137931034 106.682146367 69% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.1724137931 20.7667163134 68% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.20689655172 7.06120827912 60% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 16.0 3.9879759519 401% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 3.4128256513 234% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.222518390124 0.244688304435 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0485048101238 0.084324248473 58% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0468784352249 0.0667982634062 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.132328524268 0.151304729494 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0457323661389 0.056905535591 80% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.1 13.0946893788 77% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 48.81 50.2224549098 97% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.17 12.4159519038 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.29 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 103.0 78.4519038076 131% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 5.0 9.78957915832 51% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.1190380762 75% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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