You went on a vacation recently and lost an item and thank God you have an insurance.
Dear Sir or Madam,
I am writing to make a claim on my travel insurance policy number 135. Needless to say, I lost a gold Rolex wrist watch ,with a bronze face and a gold and silver strap during the vacation.The insurance covers the cost of any item lost during the holiday. Meanwhile, my name is James Holland and I signed up for the policy before I proceeded on the trip
However, I arrived at my holiday destination on the 22nd of June, 2019 and checked into a 5-star hotel named Barnes intercontinental hotel and resorts center and I went swimming the second day evening around 5pm. Meanwhile, before I went into the pool, I eft the watch on the pool side table but to my astonishment I could not find the watch when I finished swimming and I alerted the hotel staff immediately but all effort proved abortive to find the watch. I later filed a report at the police station.
Needless to say, I want the company to pay me the full cost of the wrist watch or better still get me a replacement because I really love the watch.
Thanks for your anticipated support and I hope to hear from you soon.
Yours sincerely,
James Holland.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 102, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...mber 135. Needless to say, I lost a gold Rolex wrist watch ,with a bronze face an...
^^
Line 3, column 121, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...to say, I lost a gold Rolex wrist watch ,with a bronze face and a gold and silver...
^^
Line 3, column 190, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: The
...ld and silver strap during the vacation.The insurance covers the cost of any item l...
^^^
Line 3, column 316, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...is James Holland and I signed up for the policy before I proceeded on the trip ...
^^
Line 3, column 355, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...e policy before I proceeded on the trip However, I arrived at my holiday destina...
^^^^^
Line 5, column 61, Rule ID: COMMA_MONTH_DATE[1]
Message: The comma is probably incorrect: 'June 2019'.
Suggestion: June 2019
...t my holiday destination on the 22nd of June, 2019 and checked into a 5-star hotel named B...
^^^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, really, second, so, still, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 1.0 7.48453608247 13% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 4.92783505155 20% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 5.05154639175 238% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.03092783505 33% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 32.9175257732 73% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 26.3917525773 99% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 3.85567010309 182% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 943.0 937.175257732 101% => OK
No of words: 209.0 206.0 101% => OK
Chars per words: 4.51196172249 4.54256449028 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.80221413058 3.78020617076 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.54719874048 2.54303337028 100% => OK
Unique words: 124.0 127.690721649 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.593301435407 0.622605031667 95% => OK
syllable_count: 293.4 290.88556701 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 12.6804123711 63% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 16.3608247423 159% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 94.3649829121 44.8134815571 211% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 117.875 76.5299724578 154% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.125 16.8248392259 155% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.75 4.34317383033 132% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 2.54639175258 236% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 7.41237113402 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.073513953586 0.216113520407 34% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0305352640088 0.0766984524023 40% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0449388848089 0.0603063233224 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.05270734218 0.12726935374 41% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0495810723906 0.0580467560999 85% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.9 8.37731958763 154% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 62.01 70.7449484536 88% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 7.45979381443 149% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.17 8.71597938144 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.72 7.59969072165 102% => OK
difficult_words: 37.0 41.2886597938 90% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 17.5 8.62886597938 203% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 12.4 8.54432989691 145% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 8.15463917526 159% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.