Some people believe that people who do physical work should be paid on par with the people who have high-level degrees
Do you agree or disagree?
According to some, the manual workforce should be paid the same as highly educated people. I am of the opinion that educated professionals deserve to be paid higher.
Firstly, manual workers lack the studies and experience to be hired on top management positions with the highest salaries. There are a lot of specialized jobs which require strategic expertise and leadership skills which only comes with higher studies. Their salaries are higher because of their technical knowledge and particular skill required for a job which mostly does not require any physical work.
Secondly, If physical workers will be paid the same as people with higher degrees then education will lose its value. People would prefer to start learning manual work instead of going to colleges which would decrease the literacy rate in a country. Without education, workforce produced will be with basic knowledge and no degrees to polish their skills. Moreover, people with higher studies will also be demotivated of their outcome which would be the same as people with lesser degrees.
Lastly, salaries are decided by the level of education and expertise instead of manual work experience. Nowadays, Chief Executive Officers are earning the highest salaries in the job market. They are earning a lot of money because of their specialized skills to lead a company and to accomplish profits. To illustrate, the salary of a person who is leading the company can never be the same as labor who helps in building structures.
In brief, I believe that manual workers do not possess the required knowledge or skills to perform jobs which are considered as highly paid. They lack education and experience to match the high income of top professionals.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, if, lastly, moreover, second, secondly, so, then, in brief
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 12.0 24.0651302605 50% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1453.0 1615.20841683 90% => OK
No of words: 281.0 315.596192385 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.17081850534 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09427095027 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.6466630248 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 145.0 176.041082164 82% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.516014234875 0.561755894193 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 451.8 506.74238477 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 22.3155152802 49.4020404114 45% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 96.8666666667 106.682146367 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.7333333333 20.7667163134 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.33333333333 7.06120827912 76% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 8.67935871743 23% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 3.4128256513 264% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.254780633326 0.244688304435 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0827919143675 0.084324248473 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.066216636308 0.0667982634062 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.128030718684 0.151304729494 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0621550834616 0.056905535591 109% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.3 13.0946893788 94% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 50.2224549098 106% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.71 12.4159519038 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.46 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 70.0 78.4519038076 89% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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