It is often a dichotomy on whether people who do physical work or accomplish high-level degrees must be paid or not. Personally, I think it can be advantageous, thus I certainly agree with the statement and will give substantial reasons.
First of all, the government should encourage people to improve and money might be a kind of award for people who satisfy themselves to just be better. People are those who make changes and have well-being society benefits the state of a country, while there are many individuals who have not a healthy lifestyle or not interesting in an education. As an example, many parliaments of different countries provide people who have an outstanding performance in education is provided by flats and extra income. That’s why it is important to care about those who put themselves into labor to make changes.
Secondly, health fanatics and educators will keep motivated others by taking into priority their lifestyles. In other words, people are affected day by day by the digital and busy world, which make them insensible and very exhausted, that’s why they find themselves in an unreal world and in ingesting junk food. This issue has become one of the paramount problems of a global society. For instance, a community in America was suffering from health problems and the government had decided to make advertisings by showing people who do physical activities. Therefore, it will be beneficial for both the community and individuals.
To conclude, I strongly believe the benefits of such trend will outweigh the disadvantages of it.
- Some people believe that children should be given lessons on how to manage money in the school. do you agree or disagree? 67
- Demand for food is increasing worldwide What is the cause of this What measures can the international community take to make sure the supply of food is enough 75
- Some people believe that advertisements are misleading for children, while advertiser claim that they provide knowledge. Give your opinion. 61
- Nowadays some people think that public libraries are not necessary, while others disagree. Discuss both views and give your own opinion and examples. 73
- The government should make people take responsibility for their actions to the environment. To what extent do you agree? 56
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 145, Rule ID: PHRASE_REPETITION[1]
Message: This phrase is duplicated. You should probably leave only 'day by'.
Suggestion: day by
...es. In other words, people are affected day by day by the digital and busy world, which make ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, second, secondly, so, therefore, thus, well, while, for instance, i think, kind of, first of all, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 41.998997996 74% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1326.0 1615.20841683 82% => OK
No of words: 258.0 315.596192385 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.13953488372 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.00778971557 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.96684602736 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 159.0 176.041082164 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.616279069767 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 423.9 506.74238477 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.5418062199 49.4020404114 88% => OK
Chars per sentence: 110.5 106.682146367 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.5 20.7667163134 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.25 7.06120827912 145% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.382275539046 0.244688304435 156% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.122326345831 0.084324248473 145% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.118954561602 0.0667982634062 178% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.202021354985 0.151304729494 134% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.129926444385 0.056905535591 228% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.5 13.0946893788 103% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.53 12.4159519038 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.9 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 69.0 78.4519038076 88% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.78957915832 148% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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