Today people are travelling more than ever before. WHY is this case? What are the benefits of travelling for the traveler?
It is true that rates of traveling among people have significantly increased if compared to how it used to be in the past. Not only will this essay discuss the reasons behind this phenomenon but it will also clarify traveling advantages for travelers.
Nowadays, people are used to traveling for more than one cause. First, the deterioration in the financial state has made vast numbers of people to travel seeking greater economic opportunities, and the Gulf area, which is witnessing a remarkable increment in the number of expatriates, is a salient example for this. Another factor for the unprecedented traveling rate is the Internet, which has made more people eager to explore the real world that they watch through pictures on different social media platforms. For instance, my husband and I traveled to Singapore last year after we had joined a Facebook traveling page that shares peoples’ experiences and pictures from different parts of the world.
Regardless of the reasons behind traveling, it has undoubtedly considerable merits for any traveler. To begin with, traveling contributes to increasing peoples’ knowledge towards new cultures. Travelers get the chance to visit museums and historical places as well as to try exotic cuisines; as a result, this would enrich their information and equip them with plenty of unforgettable memories. Furthermore, people who travel get exposed to different varieties of situations that can immensely refine their personalities and make them more creative. Moreover, several studies have shown that people who travel are better at problem-solving in unconventional ways.
To conclude, whether people are traveling to explore different destinations or to seek a better livelihood, they are more likely to enjoy myriad benefits from their excursions which would affect them positively.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, furthermore, if, moreover, so, well, as to, for instance, as a result, as well as, it is true, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1564.0 1615.20841683 97% => OK
No of words: 285.0 315.596192385 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.48771929825 5.12529762239 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10876417139 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.08529809378 2.80592935109 110% => OK
Unique words: 177.0 176.041082164 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.621052631579 0.561755894193 111% => OK
syllable_count: 494.1 506.74238477 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 55.0975775834 49.4020404114 112% => OK
Chars per sentence: 130.333333333 106.682146367 122% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.75 20.7667163134 114% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.5 7.06120827912 149% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.421779048127 0.244688304435 172% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.167040942179 0.084324248473 198% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0725102138364 0.0667982634062 109% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.25160006804 0.151304729494 166% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0655740854851 0.056905535591 115% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.3 13.0946893788 124% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 39.67 50.2224549098 79% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.86 12.4159519038 120% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.65 8.58950901804 112% => OK
difficult_words: 88.0 78.4519038076 112% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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