Nations should pass laws to preserve any remaining wilderness areas in their natural state, even if these areas could be developed for economic gain.
Whether the wilderly area has to be protected ,or should be used for developing infrastructure is subject of moot. Here, the prompt advocates categorically that wilderly area should be used for economic development. I mostly disagree with this statement due to following two reasons and qualification why in some cases wilderly area has to be altered.
Firstly, local governement should make attempt to convert the wilderly area into tourism site so that,in doing so, not only these area can be prevented from destruction but also, significant economic development in the area can be achieved. Making these unsullied area accessible to tourist (mostly researchers), will help to increase employement opportunity in local level and thereby, helping in economic development.
Secondly, various environmental degradations are resulted from destruction of the wilderly areas and this may even result in appalling consequences on economic sector.When the area is destroyed for building infrastructures, wildlife habitats are also destructed as well which may result in extinction of rare wild flora and fauna. Also,in addition to these interrelated effect such as increase in air and water pollution and lack of free space other than concrete jungle, this may even lead to health problem on people which indirectly effect economic status of people.
Admittedly, however, there are some cases where the wilderly area need to be rejuvenated by humans in order to prevent some harsh future effects. For instance, desertification need to be halted, even if it is in wilderly state, because it not only destroy ecosystem but also effect significantly on economy of the state. Dams and landslides protection structure has to be built to overcome flood and landslides.
So in these critical case, it is suitable that the wilderly area should be changed in order to prevent collosal damage in future.
Consequently, the final verdict is yet to be establish on whether to preserve or destroy the wilerly area. But as it stands, preserving these unsullied area prove to be more profitiable.
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- In any field of inquiry, the beginner is more likely than the expert to make important contributions. 70
- Nations should pass laws to preserve any remaining wilderness areas in their natural state, even if these areas could be developed for economic gain. 66
- Society should make efforts to save endangered species only if the potential extinction of those species is the result of human activities. 62
- Requiring university students to take a variety of courses outside their major fields of study is the best way to ensure that students become truly educated. 50
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, first, firstly, however, if, may, second, secondly, so, well, as to, for instance, in addition, such as, in some cases
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 19.5258426966 102% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 12.4196629213 97% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 14.8657303371 94% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 11.3162921348 62% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 16.0 33.0505617978 48% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 58.6224719101 77% => OK
Nominalization: 15.0 12.9106741573 116% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1761.0 2235.4752809 79% => OK
No of words: 326.0 442.535393258 74% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.4018404908 5.05705443957 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.24917287072 4.55969084622 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.06165243103 2.79657885939 109% => OK
Unique words: 185.0 215.323595506 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.567484662577 0.4932671777 115% => OK
syllable_count: 570.6 704.065955056 81% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.59117977528 113% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 6.24550561798 48% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.99550561798 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.10617977528 97% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.77640449438 113% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.38483146067 46% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 20.2370786517 64% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 23.0359550562 109% => OK
Sentence length SD: 70.0344800964 60.3974514979 116% => OK
Chars per sentence: 135.461538462 118.986275619 114% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.0769230769 23.4991977007 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.0 5.21951772744 211% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.97078651685 121% => OK
Language errors: 11.0 7.80617977528 141% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 10.2758426966 39% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 5.13820224719 117% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.83258426966 62% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.399470716211 0.243740707755 164% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.161114283567 0.0831039109588 194% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0758396076728 0.0758088955206 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.220299196243 0.150359130593 147% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.055956620302 0.0667264976115 84% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.5 14.1392134831 117% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 29.18 48.8420337079 60% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 11.2 7.92365168539 141% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.4 12.1743820225 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.34 12.1639044944 118% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.77 8.38706741573 116% => OK
difficult_words: 101.0 100.480337079 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.5 11.8971910112 105% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 11.2143820225 107% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 11.7820224719 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 66.67 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 4.0 Out of 6
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