Some people believe that sports are a key element in our society, while others argue that it’s just a recreational activity to be done in one’s free time. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
People from some country and society believes that sports are playing a vital role in everyone's life. But others are arguing and saying that it is just a leisure time activity. Being a part of society, I feel that sports is not just a free time activity, it has been a part of daily routine for everyone who wants healthy and physically fit in their life. I support sports is a key elements in our society, in this essay, I elaborate both the views.
To begin with, sports are effective and keep us physically and mentally fit too, It helps us to reduce the stress and tension of our day-to-day routine life. Sports plays an important role in our society to gather different religious people in one place and keep religion views other side. In past, there was less awareness about sports because of very less interest given by government as well as by our society too. But now the time people are very active and government also promote the sports at their local level arrange different types of tournaments for students and elders and at somehow they are trying to encourage them. Sports keep us active, punctual, healthy, alive and teaches us how to win the battle in their life.
On the other side, In the past,It is true that sport counted as a leisure activity because not everyone has the abilities and potentials to become professional sports person. Therefore, Parents could not see the bright future of their children in sports and they gave more importance to their education. People believe that their child become engineer, doctor etc and work with the reputed companies, rather than being sport person. On that time such facilities was not there. Our group of society were thought the same and never promoted .
To recapitulate, although some people believe that leisure activity is the same as sport, I believe that sport plays an important role in the society because it has brought advantages to people in terms of health and social welfare area and also Parents encourage their children for making career in sports.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, so, therefore, well, i feel, as well as, it is true, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 7.85571142285 13% => OK
Conjunction : 19.0 10.4138276553 182% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 37.0 24.0651302605 154% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1690.0 1615.20841683 105% => OK
No of words: 351.0 315.596192385 111% => OK
Chars per words: 4.81481481481 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.32839392791 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.39844748985 2.80592935109 85% => OK
Unique words: 180.0 176.041082164 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.512820512821 0.561755894193 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 535.5 506.74238477 106% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 63.7263594511 49.4020404114 129% => OK
Chars per sentence: 112.666666667 106.682146367 106% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.4 20.7667163134 113% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.4 7.06120827912 76% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.01903807615 139% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.262058860114 0.244688304435 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0941952384434 0.084324248473 112% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0569774572218 0.0667982634062 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.171667900277 0.151304729494 113% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0687526599367 0.056905535591 121% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.9 13.0946893788 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.59 50.2224549098 113% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.91 12.4159519038 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.61 8.58950901804 89% => OK
difficult_words: 63.0 78.4519038076 80% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.