Computer are an essential feature of modern education.Some people believe that certain subjects,such as mathematics,are better taught using computers.Other,however,think that there are aspects of education in which computer use is inadequate.
Innovation is good for better life, nowadays, many area affected by computer uses.Some crowd believe the computer training are necessary to modern world.While, another group layman belief chocks and blackboard theory are much influence than computers education.Discuss both the view and given my opinion in coming paragraph.
At present day, computers teaching techniques are normal in education.In this techniques there are different types of video, puzzle and movies are used.Because of that kids are admired to good study.For instance the scientific research prove that people are memories and remember easily data if they watching videos and movies compare to blackboard studies.In addition, presently, in all industries automation are used for production and it is operated by computers, due to this computer training are must be need in modern life.
However, In blackboard system human being are tech all subject it is good for kids and they better understand to student compare to machine.for example pupils have some idea or confusion about topic they asked they mentor in computers education it is not possible. Furthermore, computers are reflected uv rays,this rays are harmful for human eyes and sometime because of uv rays teenagers are losing their vision.Moreover, under graduation loss they physical attachment with another people and lack of physical activity due to modern computers education.
In a nutshell, I am partially agree with both opinion they are equally advantages and drawbacks of use of computers education systems.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
furthermore, however, if, moreover, so, while, for example, for instance, in addition
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 13.1623246493 152% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 41.998997996 69% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1314.0 1615.20841683 81% => OK
No of words: 237.0 315.596192385 75% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.54430379747 5.12529762239 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.92362132708 4.20363070211 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.96332331184 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 149.0 176.041082164 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.628691983122 0.561755894193 112% => OK
syllable_count: 420.3 506.74238477 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 5.0 16.0721442886 31% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 47.0 20.2975951904 232% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 127.804538261 49.4020404114 259% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 262.8 106.682146367 246% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 47.4 20.7667163134 228% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 17.0 7.06120827912 241% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 15.0 5.01903807615 299% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.222645206748 0.244688304435 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.1223567252 0.084324248473 145% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0315591063026 0.0667982634062 47% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.137884011998 0.151304729494 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0206830462868 0.056905535591 36% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 28.4 13.0946893788 217% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 6.85 50.2224549098 14% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 24.0 11.3001002004 212% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 15.74 12.4159519038 127% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.9 8.58950901804 127% => OK
difficult_words: 74.0 78.4519038076 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 28.0 9.78957915832 286% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 20.8 10.1190380762 206% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 28.0 10.7795591182 260% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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