Each year, your company gives an Employee of the Year award to a worker who has performed exceptionally well. You believe that someone with whom you work should receive the award this year.
Write a letter to your supervisor. In the letter
- Describe your colleague’s job at the
company
- Describe a time you worked with this
person
- Explain why you believe this person
deserves the award
Dear Ms. Jackson,
I am writing to you in connection with "Employee of the Year" award. I am very delighted to recommand Mr. John Doe for this years award. I had pleasure working with him for the past 2 years.
As you are aware, we had a successful deployment of our "Fusion" program last may. As Fusion being one of the biggest program our team ever worked on and John was the major contributor in the Design and architecture part of the project. He had worked so many weekends and late nights when we needed to finish one our toughest modules. He was also great team player and helped our team members multiple occasions.
Currently, he is leading the "Fusion 2.0" program and am sure he will drive this program till the end successfully. Am sure, no one deserves this appreciation as much as John deserves.
I look forward to meeting you next week to discuss further on this.
Regards,
Lala
| Post date | Users | Rates | Link to Content |
|---|---|---|---|
| 2019-12-26 | ieltsgttesttaker | 61 | view |
| 2019-06-20 | renko.tran | 84 | view |
| 2019-06-19 | lalatheghillli | 73 | view |
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 148, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...mand Mr. John Doe for this years award. I had pleasure working with him for the p...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, look, may, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.48453608247 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 4.92783505155 41% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.03092783505 33% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 32.9175257732 67% => OK
Preposition: 17.0 26.3917525773 64% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 780.0 937.175257732 83% => OK
No of words: 161.0 206.0 78% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.84472049689 4.54256449028 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.56210296601 3.78020617076 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.93117692334 2.54303337028 115% => OK
Unique words: 105.0 127.690721649 82% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.652173913043 0.622605031667 105% => OK
syllable_count: 226.8 290.88556701 78% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 16.0 16.3608247423 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 35.2018970188 44.8134815571 79% => OK
Chars per sentence: 78.0 76.5299724578 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.1 16.8248392259 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.4 4.34317383033 55% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.146928845883 0.216113520407 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.059663612564 0.0766984524023 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0723556480114 0.0603063233224 120% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.101909249258 0.12726935374 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0990048053616 0.0580467560999 171% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.4 8.37731958763 112% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 72.16 70.7449484536 102% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 7.45979381443 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.5 8.71597938144 120% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.26 7.59969072165 109% => OK
difficult_words: 39.0 41.2886597938 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 8.62886597938 93% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 8.54432989691 98% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.