The table below shows the television viewing figures for sports by country, in millions. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.Write at least 100 words.

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The table below shows the television viewing figures for sports by country, in millions. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
Write at least 100 words.

The table give us information about viewing figures for sports by country, in million. There are four countries in the table and four kinds of sport include tennis, golf, motor racing and athletics.
In general, all four countries are having high viewing rate, in which USA is leading in tennis and golf with the number of viewing are 7 and 11.2 in turn. Following USA, UK is in second rank on tennis but it is most interest in motor racing with 6.4 million view. In contrast, people from Canada do not like motor racing but they are exciting with tennis. Australia citizen are also fond of watching tennis while only 3 millions view on athletics.
In conclusion, tennis is popular game and it has viewing rate almost balance among four countries. Motor racing is an action sport and only be attractive in UK only but not in USA and Canada.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 79, Rule ID: NODT_DOZEN[1]
Message: Use simply: 'a million'.
Suggestion: a million
...ewing figures for sports by country, in million. There are four countries in the table...
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Line 3, column 192, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...e in UK only but not in USA and Canada.
^^^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, second, so, while, in conclusion, in contrast, in general

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 7.0 157% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 6.8 147% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.15609756098 32% => OK
Pronoun: 4.0 5.60731707317 71% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 33.7804878049 74% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.97073170732 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 695.0 965.302439024 72% => OK
No of words: 150.0 196.424390244 76% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.63333333333 4.92477711251 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.49963551158 3.73543355544 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.31256471381 2.65546596893 87% => OK
Unique words: 91.0 106.607317073 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.606666666667 0.547539520022 111% => OK
syllable_count: 215.1 283.868780488 76% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 1.0 4.33902439024 23% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 3.36585365854 149% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 22.4926829268 80% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 20.6363605076 43.030603864 48% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 86.875 112.824112599 77% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.75 22.9334400587 82% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.5 5.23603664747 162% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 1.69756097561 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 3.70975609756 162% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.09268292683 49% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.116317162886 0.215688989381 54% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0629088223961 0.103423049105 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0827742677375 0.0843802449381 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0983408498997 0.15604864568 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0765486210347 0.0819641961636 93% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.8 13.2329268293 74% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 70.13 61.2550243902 114% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.9 10.3012195122 77% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.57 11.4140731707 84% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.69 8.06136585366 95% => OK
difficult_words: 30.0 40.7170731707 74% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 11.4329268293 79% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.9970731707 84% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.0658536585 90% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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More content wanted.

Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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