You have just spent a week with a friend on a holiday. When you got home, you realized you had left your wallet there.
Write a letter to your friend. In your letter
- Thank you friend for the holiday.
- Explain that you left your wallet in their house.
- Give them instructions of how to send it back to you
Dear Tom,
I trust this message finds you well. i’m just writing to ask you a favor to send me the wallet I left at your house last week.
i’ve got to give you my thanks first for having me at your place for two weeks. it was the best 2-week vacation in Los Angeles staying with you. my friend, i’m extremely glad that you had taken me to all iconic landmarks in town because these places were absolutely awesome.
About my wallet, I’d put it in the drawer of the table next to the door of my room and I forgot to double check everything when I left your house because I was late for my flight. you know that i’ve always been absent-minded when i’m under pressure.
you could pack up the wallet and send it straight to my address in Vietnam via normal mailing post or you could use FedEx for faster service. And don’t worry, I’ll take care of the courier cost.
Again, thank you for your help, my friend. I owe you big time.
All the best,
Truong
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: I&apos
... I trust this message finds you well. i'm just writing to ask you a favor to se...
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: I&apos
...llet I left at your house last week. i've got to give you my thanks first for ...
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: It
... having me at your place for two weeks. it was the best 2-week vacation in Los Ang...
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: My
...cation in Los Angeles staying with you. my friend, i'm extremely glad that yo...
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: You
...house because I was late for my flight. you know that i've always been absent-...
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: You
...minded when i'm under pressure. you could pack up the wallet and send it st...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, so, well, you know
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.48453608247 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 4.92783505155 41% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 39.0 32.9175257732 118% => OK
Preposition: 20.0 26.3917525773 76% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.85567010309 26% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 826.0 937.175257732 88% => OK
No of words: 183.0 206.0 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.51366120219 4.54256449028 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.67800887145 3.78020617076 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.20059197365 2.54303337028 87% => OK
Unique words: 119.0 127.690721649 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.650273224044 0.622605031667 104% => OK
syllable_count: 236.7 290.88556701 81% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.13402061856 77% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 16.3608247423 92% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.9602700159 44.8134815571 107% => OK
Chars per sentence: 68.8333333333 76.5299724578 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.25 16.8248392259 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.08333333333 4.34317383033 48% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 2.54639175258 236% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 7.41237113402 121% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.408537985033 0.216113520407 189% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.16545348144 0.0766984524023 216% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.110254913205 0.0603063233224 183% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.2719737831 0.12726935374 214% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.101645693528 0.0580467560999 175% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.4 8.37731958763 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 81.63 70.7449484536 115% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 5.6 7.45979381443 75% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.29 8.71597938144 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.71 7.59969072165 88% => OK
difficult_words: 27.0 41.2886597938 65% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 8.62886597938 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 8.54432989691 94% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.