Some people think that exercise is the key to health while others feel that having a balanced diet is more important. Discuss both sides and give your opinion.
Recently, whether physical exercise or a balanced diet is the key to health has become a heated topic. Rather either physical exercise or a well-balanced diet are more important than other becomes even more controversial. There is a compelling notion on both sides. In this essay I will elaborate both sides of arguments and close a logical conclusion at the end.
physical exercise has been prove playing a crucial role in human well-being, particular oxygen consumption exercise. The rationale of this argument that exercise can improve blood circulation throughout body leading to improve nutrient and oxygen supply to muscles and organs, at the same time, a sufficient blood flow able to remove metabolism by products from the system that improves healing capacity and velocity in micro vascular system resulting in reducing risk of atherosclerosis, it may cause heart failure or stroke.
On the other hands, a well-balanced diet can offer both artery and mineral homeostasis condition to support our body works. A well-balanced diet can also provide energy and able to eliminate disease that may cause by malnutrition.
As per the argued points I mentioned above, I inclined both physical exercise and a well-balanced diet are playing important roles in maintaining our body well-being. Therefore, we cannot outweight one or the other.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: Rather,
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, may, so, therefore, well, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 10.5418719212 66% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 6.10837438424 115% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 8.36945812808 131% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 5.94088669951 50% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 12.0 20.9802955665 57% => OK
Preposition: 23.0 31.9359605911 72% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 5.75862068966 87% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1138.0 1207.87684729 94% => OK
No of words: 212.0 242.827586207 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.3679245283 5.00649968141 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.81578560438 3.92707691288 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.04638111179 2.71678728327 112% => OK
Unique words: 132.0 139.433497537 95% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.622641509434 0.580463131201 107% => OK
syllable_count: 371.7 379.143842365 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.57093596059 115% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 4.6157635468 65% => OK
Article: 4.0 1.56157635468 256% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 1.71428571429 58% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.65517241379 82% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6551724138 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.5024630542 102% => OK
Sentence length SD: 98.0762968306 50.4703680194 194% => OK
Chars per sentence: 113.8 104.977214359 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.2 20.9669160288 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.9 7.25397266985 68% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.33497536946 56% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 6.9802955665 86% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 2.75862068966 36% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 2.91625615764 103% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.209679963937 0.242375264174 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0935483135911 0.0925447433944 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.063218668725 0.071462118173 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.135908862749 0.151781067708 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0869941125128 0.0609392437508 143% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.5 12.6369458128 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 33.24 53.1260098522 63% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 10.9458128079 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.87 11.5310837438 120% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.97 8.32886699507 120% => OK
difficult_words: 71.0 55.0591133005 129% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.94827586207 85% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.3980295567 100% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.5123152709 133% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 88.8888888889 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 80.0 Out of 90
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