Human beings like to copy each other and this is reflected in the popularity of fashion, clothes, and consumer goods. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
In this day and age, you can find easily people wearing the same clothes and using the same electronic products on the street because they want to show their personality. Although many people believe that these people just like to imitate others and choose to follow the fashion trend, I would argue there are also many people continuing to enjoy their own life.
People like to copy fashionable clothes from others, possibly because they want to show their best to others. Fashion trend is like a direction which can help people to decide what they should wear and use in their daily life in order to attract others attention successfully. For instance, jeans are extremely welcomed among young people, and before trying to wear this kind of cloth, they may think it is fashionable and cool. As a result, they choose to wear jeans and think that their best aspect is shown to others.
Meanwhile, some people who imitate others hobbies or interests including using advanced equipment are probably able to improve their experience in using these devices and improve their working efficiency. Devices with up-to-date features can help them ease their life and make their work more productive. For example, many companies carry out the automatic operation, because the production efficiency can be assured in comparison to companies’ labour from the human. When these companies see their rivals using robots to prepare products, they will probably change their plans and also begin to introduce automatic production. Although they copy other companies’ production mode, their efficiency can still not fall behind others.
On the other hand, we also cannot ignore that some people may not be interested in copying other people’s work. It is possibly because that they think they already have had a comfortable life, they do not need to follow others. An example is that many older people are less likely to enjoy the fashionable things; they would rather enjoy their quiet and peaceful life than have a colourful life in the last of their lives. Fresh things can make them difficult to get in and even get a great experience.
In conclusion, following the fashion trend is very popular in today life because most people want to get other people’s attention by pursuing novel stuff. However, I believe that there are still many people focus on their own lives.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, if, may, so, still, while, for example, for instance, in conclusion, kind of, as a result, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 7.85571142285 178% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 45.0 24.0651302605 187% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 48.0 41.998997996 114% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1990.0 1615.20841683 123% => OK
No of words: 392.0 315.596192385 124% => OK
Chars per words: 5.07653061224 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.44960558625 4.20363070211 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.53092081726 2.80592935109 90% => OK
Unique words: 198.0 176.041082164 112% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.505102040816 0.561755894193 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 621.0 506.74238477 123% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 5.43587174349 202% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.353026925 49.4020404114 82% => OK
Chars per sentence: 117.058823529 106.682146367 110% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.0588235294 20.7667163134 111% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.23529411765 7.06120827912 102% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 15.0 8.67935871743 173% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.118865022238 0.244688304435 49% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0457463463658 0.084324248473 54% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0382315659495 0.0667982634062 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0775876678408 0.151304729494 51% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.022197101867 0.056905535591 39% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.0 13.0946893788 107% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 50.2224549098 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.48 12.4159519038 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.64 8.58950901804 89% => OK
difficult_words: 71.0 78.4519038076 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.78957915832 138% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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