A country become more interesting and develops more quickly when it is population includes a mixture of nationalities.

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A country become more interesting and develops more quickly when it is population includes a mixture of nationalities.

Nowadays, Global migration are famous in all the country.Some believers think it is good for country development. I am completely agree with this statement and explain in coming paragraphs.
To insitialy start with first point there are number of territory have no youngster and adult peoples so as lack of human resource and it is filled by migration.for example Research of 2018 prediction about in European contrary inadequate young people and 70% peoples are pensioner in 2030 so there are number of requriments average person who doing job and keepers to there citizen.This requirement filfulth by immegration.
Moreover,Secondly major reason is educated and scineties are immegrate another country and work with all togather and innovented a good thing who change better life of people.for instance 2000+ scientist work in nasa who are comes from 195 different countries and work for people better life.
However, Sometime migration is harmful for there street people.because of immigration the price of property are increase in addition job competition are incline.for example, in america in 2017 30% american crowd are unemployed because of another countries peoples are work as low prices labours. another examples is price of 3bhk flat is 1 million dollars are rapidly increase and reach 2.5 millions dollars.
In a nut sell, The advantage of immigration are over come to the drawbacks. Immigrations are good for global world for a precent times.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 58, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Some
...migration are famous in all the country.Some believers think it is good for country ...
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Line 1, column 131, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'agreed'.
Suggestion: agreed
...or country development. I am completely agree with this statement and explain in comi...
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Line 2, column 384, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: This
... doing job and keepers to there citizen.This requirement filfulth by immegration. ...
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Line 3, column 10, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , Secondly
...ment filfulth by immegration. Moreover,Secondly major reason is educated and scineties ...
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Line 3, column 219, Rule ID: WHO_NOUN[1]
Message: A noun should not follow "who". Try changing to a verb or maybe to 'who is a are'.
Suggestion: who is a are
...r instance 2000+ scientist work in nasa who are comes from 195 different countries and ...
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Line 4, column 297, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Another
...peoples are work as low prices labours. another examples is price of 3bhk flat is 1 mil...
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Line 4, column 314, Rule ID: AGREEMENT_SENT_START[4]
Message: You should probably use: 'are'.
Suggestion: are
...as low prices labours. another examples is price of 3bhk flat is 1 million dollars...
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Line 4, column 369, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'increased'.
Suggestion: increased
...k flat is 1 million dollars are rapidly increase and reach 2.5 millions dollars. In a ...
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Line 5, column 7, Rule ID: NUT_NOT[1]
Message: Did you mean 'not'?
Suggestion: not
... and reach 2.5 millions dollars. In a nut sell, The advantage of immigration are ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, however, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, for example, for instance, in addition

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 13.1623246493 144% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 7.85571142285 0% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 5.0 24.0651302605 21% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 41.998997996 71% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1231.0 1615.20841683 76% => OK
No of words: 230.0 315.596192385 73% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.35217391304 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.89432290496 4.20363070211 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.01577766651 2.80592935109 107% => OK
Unique words: 144.0 176.041082164 82% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.626086956522 0.561755894193 111% => OK
syllable_count: 387.0 506.74238477 76% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 16.0721442886 50% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 28.0 20.2975951904 138% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 128.016539459 49.4020404114 259% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 153.875 106.682146367 144% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.75 20.7667163134 138% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.25 7.06120827912 159% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 5.01903807615 179% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0305124600865 0.244688304435 12% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0124550611606 0.084324248473 15% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0167372004022 0.0667982634062 25% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.017151337146 0.151304729494 11% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.015422511886 0.056905535591 27% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 18.1 13.0946893788 138% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 34.6 50.2224549098 69% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.4 11.3001002004 136% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.34 12.4159519038 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.83 8.58950901804 114% => OK
difficult_words: 70.0 78.4519038076 89% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.5 9.78957915832 158% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 10.1190380762 130% => OK
text_standard: 16.0 10.7795591182 148% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Minimum 250 words wanted.
It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.

Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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