they Educational institutions have a responsibility to dissuade students from pursuing fields of study in which are unlikely to succeed.
It is irrefutable that our future job can be entirely undershadowed by our field of study.Every pupil has differsnt outlook to the life which is a unique quality of every body,but on the way of choosing the right and suitable way,we need an amalgamation of fruitful advices from the mentors and many other people especificly our close relatives.However,i prsonally believe that each of us should follow our favourite studies regardless of the amount of salary and...although it might have some serious drawbacks for both ourselves and the society.
The first reason which i am going to deal with is that all of the residences of a country are not well-informed regarding the possible happenings that may come about in the far or near future.In the other words,the word is proufondly influenced by our diurnal demands such as clean energy,water supplies and many other important factors.If we search exactly about this problems and and their related jobs in the market,ther were not as many occupations as now in the past .The reason behind this is the progressing of new tachnologies with the help of the human wisdom and logic.So,we can figure out that it is not reasonable at all to keep some of the studies and their related markets and jobs at the bay,because thay may indicate their real efficiency in our future.
Secondly,it has become a inclination for some of the students in many countries to immigrate to another country inorder to keep on syudying.Not only it is beneficial for the students who has followed an unrelevent field of study with the situation of his/her country,but also it might have numerous undeniable positive factors for the distination state.Then,the second country can tap into the aptitudes of the immigrants inorder to reveloutionalize their industry and technology by catering adequate and satisfactory facilities for the exotic pupils.
On the other hand,that would be much better for the young generation of society to choose wisely for achieving to succes by taking tips from the tutors and mentors.moreover,the nature of every one of us is different from each other ,and this is the reason why many of the juveniles try to make a risk, and follow their dreams without paying attention to the needs and circumstances of the place where they have been born there.on the contrary,rest of them try to adapt themselves to the conditions ,and opt the best choice ,and make their families and teachers pleased.
In brief,it is true that different people have various attitudes ,and they are always fidgeting about their desires.It is the authorities duty to symbolize the outcome and the future of every occupation which has been selected by an individual.The key point is that they should not set legislations about this issue ,and let the youngsters to choose in a free atmosphere.
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- they Educational institutions have a responsibility to dissuade students from pursuing fields of study in which are unlikely to succeed. 66
- Claim: We can usually learn much more from people whose views we share than from those whose views contradict our own.Reason: Disagreement can cause stress and inhibit learning. 66
- There is now evidence that the relaxed pace of life in small towns promotes better health and greater longevity than does the hectic pace of life in big cities. Businesses in the small town of Leeville report fewer days of sick leave taken by individual w 12
- “Some people believe that government funding of the arts is necessary to ensure that the arts can flourish and be available to all people. Others believe that government funding of the arts threatens the integrity of the arts.”Write a response in whic 70
- If a goal is worthy, then any means taken to attain it are justifiable. Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the statementand explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and supporting yo 66
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, look, may, moreover, regarding, second, secondly, so, then, well, in brief, such as, it is true, on the contrary, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 19.5258426966 97% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 12.4196629213 89% => OK
Conjunction : 25.0 14.8657303371 168% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 11.3162921348 115% => OK
Pronoun: 48.0 33.0505617978 145% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 74.0 58.6224719101 126% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 12.9106741573 54% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2365.0 2235.4752809 106% => OK
No of words: 465.0 442.535393258 105% => OK
Chars per words: 5.08602150538 5.05705443957 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.64369019777 4.55969084622 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.07223400899 2.79657885939 110% => OK
Unique words: 249.0 215.323595506 116% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.535483870968 0.4932671777 109% => OK
syllable_count: 744.3 704.065955056 106% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 6.24550561798 128% => OK
Article: 6.0 4.99550561798 120% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.10617977528 97% => OK
Conjunction: 8.0 1.77640449438 450% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.38483146067 91% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 5.0 20.2370786517 25% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 93.0 23.0359550562 404% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 126.272087177 60.3974514979 209% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 473.0 118.986275619 398% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 93.0 23.4991977007 396% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 32.4 5.21951772744 621% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 40.0 7.80617977528 512% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 10.2758426966 39% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 5.13820224719 19% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.83258426966 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.117072623228 0.243740707755 48% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0662074355638 0.0831039109588 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0224868108779 0.0758088955206 30% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0662074355638 0.150359130593 44% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0224868108779 0.0667264976115 34% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 49.0 14.1392134831 347% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: -22.92 48.8420337079 -47% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 18.2 7.92365168539 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 39.6 12.1743820225 325% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 13.43 12.1639044944 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 12.22 8.38706741573 146% => OK
difficult_words: 117.0 100.480337079 116% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 29.0 11.8971910112 244% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 39.2 11.2143820225 350% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 13.0 11.7820224719 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 66.67 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 4.0 Out of 6
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