Do you agree or disagree with the following statement
It is more important to keep your old friend than to make a new one?
Before tendering my opinion, I guess it is crucial for taking a quick glance on both side of the statement. Many people hold a view that maintaining their old allies is essential. However, other people believe that making new ones is better. In my perspective, I concur with a first group of people who trust in maintaining their long-last friends because it’s simple, could lead to necessary senses and help us get through hard scene in our life.
Firstly, it takes a period of time to make a relationship with someone. In fact, friendship is a complex thing that needs a relationship between people who are match in your habit or lifestyle. That’s brings about making a new friend is not easy. Moreover, you need to introduce yourself every time you adding new buddies to friend’s list. These greeting and introducing consume a lot of energy. Hence, to keep it simple, maintaining the old buddies could be better choice.
Secondly, long-lasting friends could create trusts which are the crucial key for producing many inevitable senses like happiness and safety. For example, we don’t say something about the controversial arguments like politics perspective because we feel it not safe and need to hide some beliefs.
Finally, for this challenge world, we need friends to help and advise us in difficult situations. In these statuses persons from past years would probably assist very helpfully in formidable phenomena. An academic research has demonstrated that people who have old friends are more prosperous in society because they get assistance in some unwanted events of their life. For example, any person has faced with a financial need in order to marry or extend his or her work and in this case we can surely count on former friends more.
To put it briefly, friendship is one of the hardest things to make. Although, making a new buddy is a good thing to do, it is better to save your old friends as long as possible because they could help you in many ways which are unnoticeable sometime.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...us get through hard scene in our life. Firstly, it takes a period of time to ma...
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Message: Use simply 'period'.
Suggestion: period
...ne in our life. Firstly, it takes a period of time to make a relationship with someone. In...
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Message: A noun should not follow "who". Try changing to a verb or maybe to 'who is a are'.
Suggestion: who is a are
...hat needs a relationship between people who are match in your habit or lifestyle. That&...
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Message: Uncountable nouns are usually not used with an indefinite article. Use simply 'academic research'.
Suggestion: Academic research
...very helpfully in formidable phenomena. An academic research has demonstrated that people who have o...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
briefly, finally, first, firstly, hence, however, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, for example, i guess, in fact
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 15.1003584229 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 9.8082437276 102% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 13.8261648746 65% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 11.0286738351 82% => OK
Pronoun: 39.0 43.0788530466 91% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 52.1666666667 86% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.0752688172 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1700.0 1977.66487455 86% => OK
No of words: 342.0 407.700716846 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.97076023392 4.8611393121 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.30037696126 4.48103885553 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.73774164254 2.67179642975 102% => OK
Unique words: 200.0 212.727598566 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.584795321637 0.524837075471 111% => OK
syllable_count: 520.2 618.680645161 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.59856630824 83% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.94265232975 121% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 20.6003584229 87% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.1344086022 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.6630951014 48.9658058833 95% => OK
Chars per sentence: 94.4444444444 100.406767564 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.0 20.6045352989 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.38888888889 5.45110844103 117% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.5376344086 72% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 11.8709677419 118% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.229451244912 0.236089414692 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0730048765086 0.076458572812 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0615004485874 0.0737576698707 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.130409980361 0.150856017488 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0776717841224 0.0645574589148 120% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.5 11.7677419355 98% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 58.1214874552 104% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.1575268817 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.55 10.9000537634 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.23 8.01818996416 103% => OK
difficult_words: 79.0 86.8835125448 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.002688172 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.0537634409 95% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.247311828 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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