You have recently started work in a new company.
Write a letter to an English speaking friend. In your letter:
- explain why you changed jobs
- describe your new job
- tell him/her your other news
Dear John,
I hope you are enjoying your days with your wife in Canada! I am writing to you to let you know that I have recently join a new organization in Australia since last month. You must be wondering why I left my high paid job in India even after posted in my hometown. Actually, the life in Australia far better than India, and I have realized after visiting this country last year during my official trip. Since then, it becomes my dream to get a job and settle down here.
I have joined an IT company - TCS, Australia as a software developer with handsome remuneration. Office ambience is so nice that I do not have words to explain compare to my office in India; colleagues are friendly and helpful, workload is moderate, and no more overtime.
One more good news for you; I am blessed with a baby girl last month as well. My wife and daughter are currently with my parents in India due to obvious reason. They will shift to Australia after 6 months, when my daughter will stabilized.
Hope to see you soon!
Best regards,
Bibhu Kalita
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| 2019-07-05 | BIBHU KALITA | 78 | view |
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 118, Rule ID: HAVE_PART_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Possible agreement error -- use past participle here: 'joined'.
Suggestion: joined
...ou to let you know that I have recently join a new organization in Australia since l...
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Line 5, column 15, Rule ID: DT_PRP[1]
Message: Possible typo. Did you mean 'an' or 'IT'?
Suggestion: an; IT
... and settle down here. I have joined an IT company - TCS, Australia as a software ...
^^^^^
Line 5, column 21, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'companies'?
Suggestion: companies
...ettle down here. I have joined an IT company - TCS, Australia as a software develope...
^^^^^^^
Line 6, column 228, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'will' requires the base form of the verb: 'stabilize'
Suggestion: stabilize
...a after 6 months, when my daughter will stabilized. Hope to see you soon! Best regar...
^^^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, if, so, then, well, you know
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.0 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 1.00243902439 299% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 5.0 6.8 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 5.60731707317 535% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 26.0 33.7804878049 77% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.97073170732 76% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 869.0 965.302439024 90% => OK
No of words: 192.0 196.424390244 98% => OK
Chars per words: 4.52604166667 4.92477711251 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.72241943641 3.73543355544 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.45612251043 2.65546596893 92% => OK
Unique words: 125.0 106.607317073 117% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.651041666667 0.547539520022 119% => OK
syllable_count: 273.6 283.868780488 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 1.53170731707 522% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 1.0 4.33902439024 23% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.482926829268 414% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 3.36585365854 30% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 8.94146341463 112% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 22.4926829268 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 43.353085242 43.030603864 101% => OK
Chars per sentence: 86.9 112.824112599 77% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.2 22.9334400587 84% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.8 5.23603664747 73% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 1.69756097561 236% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 3.70975609756 189% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.09268292683 73% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.186288394909 0.215688989381 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0659530524896 0.103423049105 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0737198299343 0.0843802449381 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.102168917049 0.15604864568 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0711059809413 0.0819641961636 87% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.5 13.2329268293 72% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 69.11 61.2550243902 113% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.3 10.3012195122 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.99 11.4140731707 79% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.7 8.06136585366 96% => OK
difficult_words: 38.0 40.7170731707 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 11.4329268293 79% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.9970731707 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.