Some people believe that children's leisure activities must be educational, otherwise they are a complete waste of time.
Do you agree or disagree?
It is argued that leisure activities of young people must be related to studies, else it is considered a waste of time. This essay disagrees with the fact that activities done by toddlers in their idle time not pertinent to education as an eradication of time. Firstly, this essay will discuss that restricting free time activities to education will lead to health problems and secondly, balance lifestyle is necessary to be a successful person.
At an early age, limiting idle time activities to education might lead to stress and anxiety in young generation which will ultimately pose a negative impact on the personality of children. Children in the initial stages of life are on the verge of exploring new things and if they are not allowed to have some free time which is not related to education, they will not be able to nurture the creativity within them. For instance; a survey conducted by guardian revealed that 80% of children who utilize their free time in recreational tasks rather than educational tend to be more creative than the rest.
It is said that balance lifestyle leads to happy and prosperous life. In today's era, children who spent leisure time in educational tasks and spent little or no time in sports or recreational tasks are aggressive which damages their personalities when they grow older. They become short tempered and impatient and are unable to deal with stressful situations. Therefore, it is difficult for them to attain happiness and satisfaction in life. According to a survey conducted by New York Times, suicidal rate is higher in people who had focused more on education and have spent less time in hobbies or recreational activities in their early childhood.
In conclusion, young people with a balance lifestyle face less health problems when they grow old and are more creative and successful. Hence, they can deal with difficult situations in a calm manner and live a stress-free life.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 184, Rule ID: IN_A_X_MANNER[1]
Message: Consider replacing "in a calm manner" with adverb for "calm"; eg, "in a hasty manner" with "hastily".
...they can deal with difficult situations in a calm manner and live a stress-free life.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, hence, if, second, secondly, so, therefore, for instance, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 7.30460921844 178% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 47.0 41.998997996 112% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1620.0 1615.20841683 100% => OK
No of words: 323.0 315.596192385 102% => OK
Chars per words: 5.01547987616 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.23936324884 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.7858823089 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 161.0 176.041082164 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.498452012384 0.561755894193 89% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 519.3 506.74238477 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 51.8453549356 49.4020404114 105% => OK
Chars per sentence: 124.615384615 106.682146367 117% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.8461538462 20.7667163134 120% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.69230769231 7.06120827912 95% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.232324560586 0.244688304435 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0864470559246 0.084324248473 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0735202544597 0.0667982634062 110% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.144404103434 0.151304729494 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0623741329804 0.056905535591 110% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.6 13.0946893788 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 50.2224549098 94% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.13 12.4159519038 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.54 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 76.0 78.4519038076 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 16.0 9.78957915832 163% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.