The leaders or director of organisations are often older people. But some people say that young people can also be a leader. Do you agree or disagree?
It is true that high positions in a company are usually taken by elderly people. However, many people believe that youngsters could manage to run the organisation more efficiently. I agree with the laid statement and my inclination is justified in ensuing paragraphs.
There are several reasons I put forward to justify my opinion. First and most obvious argue that young people are open minded and creative. They will be able to operate modern technologies better than older people and they have ability to learn it faster. For example, it took only more then an hour for youth to fully control their smart phones, but it took days for elder people to use it properly.
Another reason is that youngsters have a good health condition. So that, they can work effectively under much pressure. To be more specific, the younger people can be more responsible for handling a mountain of work, which help them to gain a more handsome income for their own organization.
On the other hand, allowing senior people to hold important role in an organisation have to main benefits. Firstly, older people have more knowledge as well as more working experiences than young people. As a result, they can organised easy structure of the company. Secondly, when facing a hard situation, elder people are usually more confident than inexperienced people. So they will be able to choose the correct solutions.
In conclusion, although aged people have more experience and good ability to take decision power, I believe that better state of health and a sense of creativity may make youngsters good leaders. So this important position should be given to youngsters for improving modern systems in the company.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 288, Rule ID: COMP_THAN[2]
Message: Comparison requires 'than', not 'then' nor 'as'.
Suggestion: than
... faster. For example, it took only more then an hour for youth to fully control thei...
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Line 5, column 65, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[3]
Message: “So that” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...oungsters have a good health condition. So that they can work effectively under much pr...
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Line 7, column 227, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'can' requires the base form of the verb: 'organise'
Suggestion: organise
...han young people. As a result, they can organised easy structure of the company. Secondly...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, however, if, may, second, secondly, so, then, well, for example, in conclusion, as a result, as well as, it is true, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 41.998997996 62% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1423.0 1615.20841683 88% => OK
No of words: 281.0 315.596192385 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.0640569395 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09427095027 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.70362877277 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 163.0 176.041082164 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.580071174377 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 450.0 506.74238477 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 39.1185758404 49.4020404114 79% => OK
Chars per sentence: 83.7058823529 106.682146367 78% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.5294117647 20.7667163134 80% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.11764705882 7.06120827912 129% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 16.0 8.67935871743 184% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.205067576131 0.244688304435 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0674163445248 0.084324248473 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0438779944125 0.0667982634062 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.119575441921 0.151304729494 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0498358227384 0.056905535591 88% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.7 13.0946893788 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 50.2224549098 110% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.77 12.4159519038 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.19 8.58950901804 95% => OK
difficult_words: 67.0 78.4519038076 85% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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