These days, people work in more than one job,and often change career several times during their life. What are the advantages and disadvantages of doing this?
working in a several occupations is a common trend among most of workers nowadays. Since many of them are usually changing their jobs several times in their professional career. however, this alteration like anything has a positive and negative impact on career. this essay will explore the benefits and drawbacks on shifting various jobs every now and then.
Firstly, no doubt that dealing with many different individuals in plenty of companies will boost people’s experience. For instance, job applicants who has divers work experience form various firms are usually being hired because of their acquired skills as well as the employer will find them very fit to work in any department. Secondly, it’s irrefutable that most of workers are usually looking for more financial benefits, so they shift into another job to get higher wages. For example, the salary of the most local companies in Saudi Arabia are too low, therefore employees are always seeking for better benefits in multinational companies as they provide a higher salaries. Finally, some employees are working in very big companies, where the promotion is extremely challengeable. GE as an example, is one of the top three companies worldwide. More than 20,000 employees are working there. however, the chance of getting promotion is hard as the higher positions vacancies are not matching the number of GE’s members. therefore, most of workers resort to find another middle companies where the promotion is applicable.
On the the other hand, changing career has some disadvantages. On the foremost, the extremely low in stability. To illustrate, some employees might stay for a long time in one company. they might established a tight relationship with their colleagues, and know well about their job responsibilities. When they move into other companies, which know nothing about it, will really hurt their career because they probably not being as good as they were in previous organizations or might will not have as same recognition and friendly co-workers that they had. then, extra pressure will be added in terms of building a trust. For example, most of new employees, even in very senior level, work very hard at least in the first 3 months in order to establish a good image on their performance. this in fact , might impact on their life work balance as they will consume most of their times in the work.
In conclusion, having a several professions in one career is something very debatable as it has a positive and negative effects.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, first, firstly, however, if, look, really, second, secondly, so, then, therefore, well, at least, for example, for instance, in conclusion, in fact, no doubt, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 52.0 41.998997996 124% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2127.0 1615.20841683 132% => OK
No of words: 412.0 315.596192385 131% => OK
Chars per words: 5.16262135922 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.50530610838 4.20363070211 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.8345931666 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 218.0 176.041082164 124% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.529126213592 0.561755894193 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 657.9 506.74238477 130% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 16.0721442886 137% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 53.6814140544 49.4020404114 109% => OK
Chars per sentence: 96.6818181818 106.682146367 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.7272727273 20.7667163134 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.09090909091 7.06120827912 115% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 21.0 5.01903807615 418% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.4128256513 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.219937309647 0.244688304435 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0694620891092 0.084324248473 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0666820581555 0.0667982634062 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.148660627096 0.151304729494 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0589261045691 0.056905535591 104% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.2 13.0946893788 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 50.2224549098 106% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.65 12.4159519038 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.25 8.58950901804 96% => OK
difficult_words: 97.0 78.4519038076 124% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.